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 Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:32 pm
Look into my eyes
See my secret? Where it lies?
Look past my dirty face
Am I still a disgrace
If you see me in the dark will you spray me with mace?
But if you look into my eyes you'll see a hurt and wounded soul
my exterior is a troll
But inside I'm but a hurt angel.
These soft eyes
These soft eyes
They tell my story without lies
Open up and let me inside
I look mad but every rule I will abide
Tough as sandpaper but soft to the touch
Do me a solid and I will respond in a thank you very much
Trust my eyes not my mug
I'm not a criminal or some thug
These soft eyes
These soft eyes
They tell my story without lies
You can leave me alone
Your daughter I wont bone
When you stab me I bleed
I'm not Satan's seed
I am like you
I am not like a beast from the zoo
I keep true to my word
Even though you think me absurd.
Just look into my eyes
Look into my eyes
These soft eyes
These soft eyes
They tell my story without lies
I'm just a wounded child of forgotten creation.
Never prone to home invasion.
So you can look into my eyes and trust me
Trust me please...
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:10 pm
wow...i like it...i found myself singing it...
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:14 pm
vampiregirl178 wow...i like it...i found myself singing it... Thank you. its about my grandpa and how he looks at me.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:18 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants vampiregirl178 wow...i like it...i found myself singing it... Thank you. its about my grandpa and how he looks at me. cool...i really like it
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Rozen Black Chronicles Crew
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:58 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 9:57 am
*drops toughgirl act for split second* crying *composes herself*Its really amazing...it floods with emotion!
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:41 am
Kita_of_Revenants *drops toughgirl act for split second* crying *composes herself*Its really amazing...it floods with emotion! You mean it?
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:00 am
Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants *drops toughgirl act for split second* crying *composes herself*Its really amazing...it floods with emotion! You mean it? Yes I mean it...I know a good piece when I read one...It reminds me of a song...not one I know but just the way it flows...I like it a lot...dont be redface 4laugh
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:04 pm
Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants *drops toughgirl act for split second* crying *composes herself*Its really amazing...it floods with emotion! You mean it? Yes I mean it...I know a good piece when I read one...It reminds me of a song...not one I know but just the way it flows...I like it a lot...dont be redface 4laugh I never got a pure good reaction to my poetry or songs.
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:16 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants *drops toughgirl act for split second* crying *composes herself*Its really amazing...it floods with emotion! You mean it? Yes I mean it...I know a good piece when I read one...It reminds me of a song...not one I know but just the way it flows...I like it a lot...dont be redface 4laugh I never got a pure good reaction to my poetry or songs. Never? Well you do from me...its just touching and I cant help but say so smile
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:18 pm
Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants *drops toughgirl act for split second* crying *composes herself*Its really amazing...it floods with emotion! You mean it? Yes I mean it...I know a good piece when I read one...It reminds me of a song...not one I know but just the way it flows...I like it a lot...dont be redface 4laugh I never got a pure good reaction to my poetry or songs. Never? Well you do from me...its just touching and I cant help but say so smile I have tons of my poems and such here and my journal has a lot of stuff in it too. so if you like what you read, there is more.
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:43 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants *drops toughgirl act for split second* crying *composes herself*Its really amazing...it floods with emotion! You mean it? Yes I mean it...I know a good piece when I read one...It reminds me of a song...not one I know but just the way it flows...I like it a lot...dont be redface 4laugh I never got a pure good reaction to my poetry or songs. Never? Well you do from me...its just touching and I cant help but say so smile I have tons of my poems and such here and my journal has a lot of stuff in it too. so if you like what you read, there is more. Ive already read alot of your stuff but I will definately read more...I do like your style so that is a plus...oh and please read Flesh Out Of The Oven...It was spur of the moment right off the top of my head lol rofl
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:47 pm
Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Yes I mean it...I know a good piece when I read one...It reminds me of a song...not one I know but just the way it flows...I like it a lot...dont be redface 4laugh I never got a pure good reaction to my poetry or songs. Never? Well you do from me...its just touching and I cant help but say so smile I have tons of my poems and such here and my journal has a lot of stuff in it too. so if you like what you read, there is more. Ive already read alot of your stuff but I will definately read more...I do like your style so that is a plus...oh and please read Flesh Out Of The Oven...It was spur of the moment right off the top of my head lol rofl I read it and put in th poll that is was good. I like your style to.
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 3:49 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Lord_Von_Revenants Kita_of_Revenants Yes I mean it...I know a good piece when I read one...It reminds me of a song...not one I know but just the way it flows...I like it a lot...dont be redface 4laugh I never got a pure good reaction to my poetry or songs. Never? Well you do from me...its just touching and I cant help but say so smile I have tons of my poems and such here and my journal has a lot of stuff in it too. so if you like what you read, there is more. Ive already read alot of your stuff but I will definately read more...I do like your style so that is a plus...oh and please read Flesh Out Of The Oven...It was spur of the moment right off the top of my head lol rofl I read it and put in th poll that is was good. I like your style to. Thank you very much...I work very hard at it xp well maybe not so much stare
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