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The Murder (only a small part so tell me what you think!)

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Aeris Melios


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 12:23 pm


"So the murder Wasn't a murder.. it was suicide" Tim said to the police-force walking left and right a tall bald man with grass-green eyes walked in
"officer tim.. we have some bad knews.." he said taking his hand and rubbing what should be hair
"and that is?" Tim asked as he looked him straight in the eye
"You're dead.." he said pulling out a gun and pressing the trigger all of the squad jamp out infront of him... the gun didnt go off nobody had died except from one innocent child..
"how did that child get in here?!" tim yelled angrily at the force he then walked over to the man and punched him grabbing his gun and pointing it to his head
"you deserve this" he whisperd going to pull the trigger tim suddenly triped and shot up wards the bullet was forced down by the gravity and struck him in the chest Tim lay there bleeding, along with a child with no meaning...
PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:07 am


thats somewhat eiry..but it is very enjoyable! please do write more XDXDXD Im gunna be posting up a story I wrote...but kind of like never finnished O,o yeah

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Aeris Melios


Single Husband

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:50 am


Goddess_Keina
thats somewhat eiry..but it is very enjoyable! please do write more XDXDXD Im gunna be posting up a story I wrote...but kind of like never finnished O,o yeah

kl.. i couldn't finish this one i ran out of idea's
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