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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:28 am



When I see my phone
All I want to do is
Call you to say
Everything I've been holding in
I just want to open
My mouth and pour out
my guts for you
Every time you pick up
my heart stop and my brain
no longer connection
you've shattered my world
by showing me
something no one has ever shown me
This feeling I thought I had before
but you've shown me
how wrong I was
I thought I knew
where my life was going
It's completely changed directions
It's so hard to believe
I feel so much for you
And yet I have no words
to tell you

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 3:36 pm


This is an astounding poem, it's a feeling that's face by so many people and you placed it perfectly on verse, a fine contribution to the guild. I should say so myself, I'm the mod of the poetry section of Liquid Poetry. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:53 am


Le Duke of Undertaker
This is an astounding poem, it's a feeling that's face by so many people and you placed it perfectly on verse, a fine contribution to the guild. I should say so myself, I'm the mod of the poetry section of Liquid Poetry. 3nodding
Thank you so much! That really means alot to me.
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