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 Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:39 pm
Name : Karalee Krendall
Gender :Female
Age : 12
Year : second year student
House : Gryffindor
Ethnicity : British/caucasian
Hair/Eye Color : Her hair is usually pulled up in a tight ponytail, with a few of her bangs hanging down. She has a hair pin on the right side of her light brown hair that is think and black. Her eyes gleam with a beautiful color of shaded brown.
Pet : Her Pygmy owl's name is Haldwin. It is a female and is Kara's only pet.
Home Life : Kara and her family live in London, England.
(Father)- He is well suited in a candy shop in London. It is a shop for wizards and witches only, so it is hidden from muggles. His name is Johnathan Krendall.
(Mother)- A stay at home witch that is loving and caring for Kara and her little brother. She cooks and cleans fairly well so they have no need for a house elf. Denice Krendall is her name
(Sibling)- Kara's little brothers name is Johnny Krendall, named after his father. He is ten years old and should start school during Karalee's thrid year in Hogwarts.
Diving deeper : Karalee is a very shy young girl who studies quite often and has a knack for charms, hexes, and jinxes. She loves magical creatures, so she wants to become a dragon herder when she graduates from Hogwarts. Her dislikes are Herbology, and the dreaded Slytherins. She wishes to help her father in the candy shop for a few years before leaving London to Dragon herd, and she deeply cares for her family. She mainly keeps to herself at school so she does not have any friends yet.
Taking a closer look: As Karalee stepped into the Gryffindor tower for the second year in a row, she noticed all of the first years stare at her as she timidly walked in. She turned her head away from them to not come into eye contact. She has always been afraid of what other people might think about her. So she tries to stay away from them. She walked up to the girl's dormitory and slumped onto her bed and sighed. Another year at Hogwarts, so therefore another year of hard work, and trying to make friends. Yet she was still happy that she was away from all of the troubles at home.
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:09 am
You have been Accepted
to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
I'm the slightest bit hesitant in accepting Karalee, just because she
seems on the verge of becoming a Mary Sue. Make sure she brings out
her personality or her interest in Dragons can turn into an passion that
defines her more. It needs not be either of the two, but it has to be
something that gives the character more substance. I'm trusting that
your can do this, because there are most certainly some parts of this
profile that glimmer. Just find them and, instead, make them shine.
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