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 Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:51 pm
 I can't for the life of me get legs right, ever. Since he looks like he's ever so awkwardly taking a giant step, there is a scribbled explanation to said giant step on the right, but since that's a cop-out I wanted to know how to fix it. He's just supposed to be walking with his hands jammed in his pockets and his headphones on like he does for pretty much the entire game... well, except when in Tartarus. Also, any other proportional/facial feature placement/hair/anything critique is welcome. I've been feeling stuck in a rut lately and any help would be great.
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 3:41 pm
I think the legs are too short in comparison to the long body.
In the game, it seems like they have shorter torsos and longer legs, so... And his enthusiastic large step probably doesn't help much either xD
But, yeah, I'd say lengthen the legs a bit as a start. Something feels off with his arms too. I think it's not bent enough. I mean, when I stuff my hand in my pocket my arm is bent a fair bit more than that. Not quite a 45 degree angle, but close-ish. But being where his picket is I guess it can't be helped much mad
Anyway, I really like the head in general and the way you've done the lines on his blazer and trousers~
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 11:12 pm
Thanks for the feedback! =D
Hm. If anything I feel like I'd be more inclined to shorten his torso a bit and keep his legs the same length, but... I'll look at it from a few angles and see what I find.
His arm's not bent enough? Gotcha. I guess I'll go back and adjust the pocket position and his arm.
I'm glad you like the lines, I picked them up from various people I've seen do the same on pencil sketches. (However, most of them probably weren't anywhere near as artistically lazy as I am, lol. XD) I'm also glad the head's okay. Most of the time whenever I start a sketch and never finish it, it's always the head that's actually done, haha. XDD
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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 11:51 pm
I think it's a really nice pic. heart What's Persona? Lol. xd I was thinking of 'Persona' from Gakuen Alice. Anyway, I really like your drawing~! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:09 pm
Hayashi Kiko I think it's a really nice pic. heart What's Persona? Lol. xd I was thinking of 'Persona' from Gakuen Alice. Anyway, I really like your drawing~! 3nodding It's an awesome video game for the PS2. There's also an expansion pack for it. 3nodding I envy you and your hair-drawing skills, Kaly. D: But yaaay, Persona 3!!!! Minato's legs are too short in that picture, I'd have to agree. D:
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:07 am
Jin the Shadow Wolf Hayashi Kiko I think it's a really nice pic. heart What's Persona? Lol. xd I was thinking of 'Persona' from Gakuen Alice. Anyway, I really like your drawing~! 3nodding It's an awesome video game for the PS2. There's also an expansion pack for it. 3nodding I envy you and your hair-drawing skills, Kaly. D: But yaaay, Persona 3!!!! Minato's legs are too short in that picture, I'd have to agree. D:
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 5:24 pm
Hayashi Kiko Jin the Shadow Wolf Hayashi Kiko I think it's a really nice pic. heart What's Persona? Lol. xd I was thinking of 'Persona' from Gakuen Alice. Anyway, I really like your drawing~! 3nodding It's an awesome video game for the PS2. There's also an expansion pack for it. 3nodding I envy you and your hair-drawing skills, Kaly. D: But yaaay, Persona 3!!!! Minato's legs are too short in that picture, I'd have to agree. D: You're welcome. x3
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