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Spastic waffles
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:04 pm


Um...just something. Trying to put into words these feelings.

Until there was you…
I never knew how beautiful I could feel.
I never knew it was possible for someone to love me so completely…and never ask for a thing in return.
I never knew that a single look could mean so much.
I never knew how agonizing it could be to not know exactly what that look means.
I never knew that a single look could make me melt inside.
I never knew that I could feel so beautiful on the inside that it made me feel beautiful outside too.
I never knew that I don’t have to hear the words “you’re beautiful” to feel it.
I never knew beauty was a feeling.
I never knew how much just being friends could hurt…and yet feel so perfectly right.
I never knew what it was like to feel beautiful without feeling like I needed to try.
I never knew the feeling of not needing to try to be liked.
I never knew anyone would do so much for me.
I never knew (or thought) anyone could care about me enough to put up with half of what you do.

Until there was you…
I never knew what being loved really felt like.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:05 pm


Awwww. LUcky Waffs.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:11 pm


I think it's just a reflex to go "Awwww" after this.
I know I did.
And then I read it again, to try to find something to critique.
But I just went "Awww" again.
/such a softie. xp
PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:12 pm


Well yer' welcome, Waffles.

mrgreen

Xahmen
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Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:24 pm


Quote:
I never knew beauty was a feeling.


cry
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 5:35 am


Yeah.

It's funny how one little comment can shatter...nearly everything I just put up there. And then some.

Spastic waffles
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Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:36 am


confused That does not seem all is well...

Are you okay..
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:01 pm


Waffles-chan, do you need a hug?

Voxxx


Spastic waffles
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 6:45 pm


Tak-Jak
confused That does not seem all is well...

Are you okay..
Not really.

I'm starting to get better...but am much more confused than I was, which I thought impossible. And, um...all the stuff about beauty? I don't feel it anymore.

Voxxx: yes... sad
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