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Teenage Athena [WIP]

Black Hearted Shadow

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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 2:29 pm

Okay here's the picture of Athena I've been working on.
I actually made this one before I was working on Ares, but because it's on lined paper I'm planing on waiting to outline it 'til I have a copy of it on non-lined paper.

So mind giving me your opinions?
Red lines are loved. even though this is only a head shot.

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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:03 am

I think the nose appears weird. Maybe you can make it smaller like a dot or something. 3nodding Overall, I think it's okay^^

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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 12:25 pm

^^ thanks

Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:19 pm

i like how the hair looks kinda wet- that's cool
but i would move the eye on the right more to the right lol to space the eyes out they seem to be too close together nd maybe fix the "part" of her hair make it a line? or add a line between the other ones
but it's looking pretty good .. 3nodding .. keep at it

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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:13 pm

Mmm-kay manga! I'll try to fix up the part. and I can try to move the eye a bit. ^^

Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:56 pm

This is looking really nifty. 3nodding

Besides what's already been said, something that sticks out to me are her shoulders.
They seem very stiff, while her expression looks relaxed.
Loosen them up, maybe. Like...droop them a bit. It would look more natural, in my opinion.

I love the idea of teenage goddesses.
Very fabulous 3nodding

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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 11:19 am

Thanks Rosette. I didn't notice that about the shoulders thanks so much. I'll fix that as soon as I can. ^^

And I'm glad you like my idea too. ^^

Oh, and happy early sweet sixteen!

Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:46 am

alrighty biggrin cool-cool
i can't wait to see it!

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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:09 pm

omg i love how u do ur eyes biggrin
no comments here it looks really good

Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:39 pm

oxellebellxo

omg i love how u do ur eyes biggrin
no comments here it looks really good

^^ thanks

@manga: I'll be sure to get it up as soon as I can then. ^^

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