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 Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 7:38 pm
Hello fellow artists!
I am back once again, and like usual, request your hawk-like vision and keen eyesight or what have you.
I have just recently drawn this picture and would kindly request you point out any major flaws. I have a feel the guys arm is too long compared to his body. That and the girl's neck. Something bugs me about it, thus something must be wrong with it. -_-
Picture: Please Click Me!
I must thank you for your time in advance.
Edit: Made the girl's face more feminine!
Hopefully it looks better. c:
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:49 pm
very cute! the only problem I would point out is that the shorter person's head is too large for their body.
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 11:05 am
Thank you for pointing that out!
For some reason I have a very hard time making the head proportional to the body. Would you be so kind as too share some pointers with me?
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 2:18 pm
I think it looks really good C: and I like that they have some characteristic(?) to them and don't look indentical to every profile view pic out there razz
umm...I think the short guys arm is a bit too short...and the neck on the other guy is a bit big...it goes out to the head too early if you know what I mean... confused the skull doesn't start to go out before it is around the ear...
I don't know if this helps at all but yeah...hope you understand what I mean sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 6:04 pm
Yes, I understand. 3nodding
And I just fixed the girl's neck and entire side-view so people can tell she's a woman. And I'll definitely address the short arm. Thanks!
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:58 am
Good job! Keep it up! whee
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:50 am
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