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Could I get some critique?

Jess_S_86

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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:53 pm

Ok so I havent drawn in like forever yet I seem to have gotten down the female body to a T could anyone help me figure out what I could have done better so I can work no it some more? I know the lines are a bit visable but since I most likely will color her in Photoshop I usually dont worry too much as long as the important ones are dark enough to do so ^^ Here is the drawing I did of my avvi (tektek version)

ah *slaps forhead* I cant believe i forgot her cat ears

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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:16 pm

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I think you have done really really well <33 i really like the pose and such and the proportions look really good C:

especially the legs and such im not so hot at poses so i cant give you too much advice other than the fact im finding it hard to find things to crit on.. like the hair.. its hard to describe but it seems like its at a different angle to where the face is facing but only slightly - im nit picking as you want crit and such D: i do that too though my dad mentioned it to me and its really helped me [sometimes] its hard to visualise everything correctly let alone draw it all correctly D:

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CassyBean

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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:49 am

I redlined it for you. Hope this helps

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Alright, where I put the red circle around her elbow? even for an anthro, that's a really low elbow, I moved it up a bit, about where the lower ribcage is. That's usually proportionate for anthros/humans. (I also put a red line where the joint should be.)

the knee also was a bit far out, so I circled about where it should be (if the leg was stretched that way) and drew it redlined as such.

I'm sorry if any of these things were diliberate ^.^; hope this helps.

Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:36 pm

Wow this is really good : D
You do have the body down to a T so I don't think you need to work on that. The only thing I would suggest is to work on the shaping of the head and the facial expression but besides that it's good :3

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