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Scourged Angel

PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:22 pm


Your betrayal burns my heart.
You left me to fend for myself
When I needed you the most.

I hate the way you left.
I hate that you sit next to me
and you don't say anything.

The darkness is surrounding me,
but you aren't there to guide me.
I've fallen and you didn't catch me.

What I hate the most is how
I still love you with all my heart.
I'm waiting to hear you say "Sorry."
PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:00 am


poem of a broken heart, I liked it very much. Keep it up wink

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:55 am


I agree, it's a good poem of a fresh break-up where one party still yearns for the other. smile
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