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Tarff

PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 1:15 pm


This is a new piece of aviart I've done (second yet!). And I just wanted to see what people thought I should improve on. It's a kinda strange style, I don't deny that. I don't even know what type of style it'd be classified as, but I don't care. Anyway, ALL TYPES OF CRITIQUE are openly welcomed! Heck, you can be down right rude and I wouldn't mind...too much. You'd have to say something toward my problems with art if you're going to be rude, like "Oh, you suck at hair; lookit what you did there." That would work, because then at least I'd know that hair was a problem. Kay? Kay. 3nodding Here ya go! Go wild! By the way, I can't do backgrounds so I didn't do one.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 2:48 pm


thats really good, I cant say I see anything wrong with it~
well, sept it looks like your trying to hide her hands. xD

Gondolion


oxellebellxo

PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 5:10 pm


oh my gosh thats like reali good. its amazinggg mrgreen like wat Gondolion said, theres like nothing wrong with it biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:47 am


Gondolion
thats really good, I cant say I see anything wrong with it~
well, sept it looks like your trying to hide her hands. xD

Thanks. I didn't actually intentionally hide her hands. I wanted her holding the plushie that way and then I realized that you'd still be able to see part of both her hands and then so it just kinda looked like i hid them both. hehe. Yeah... But thank you for the compliment and the critique.

Tarff


Tarff

PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:48 am


oxellebellxo
oh my gosh thats like reali good. its amazinggg mrgreen like wat Gondolion said, theres like nothing wrong with it biggrin

Thanks, now if only I could figure out backgrounds. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:56 pm


OMG! It's really nice! I think it would be great if you could make her nose smaller? whee

Hayashi Kiko


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 11:22 pm


Hope you're okay with red lines. sweatdrop
I'm better at that than I am at trying to explain something. Visual learner and all that.
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I'd call your style animesque.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 11:46 pm


To Hayashi Kiko: Thanks. I'll take that into consideration for the future. mrgreen

To Lily_Dragon: Thanks for the redlines. They were useful in figuring out what was wrong with her. That boob shape was tricky. rofl So thanks. It'll be very useful for me. 3nodding

Tarff


qorter

PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:23 am


Hi Tarff! I was wondering, why the heck would you buy art from me when you can draw so good?!
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 5:37 pm


qorter
Hi Tarff! I was wondering, why the heck would you buy art from me when you can draw so good?!

Thanks. rofl Anyway, I like to buy art from people. They like being paid, and I like looking at different style art. That's why. blaugh And I really liked the picture you made me. mrgreen 'Sides, I'm too lazy to do a lot of art.

Tarff

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