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 Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:49 am
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 1:06 pm
Well, you can definitely tell it's your avi. blaugh Unless it's just supposed to be a strikingly similar (or congruent) avi. rofl Anyway, it's pretty good.
However, there are a couple things you could work on if you'd like:
(Your Gwee is very cute by the way)
* The hands are a bit odd. The one on the right (her left hand, holding the flowers), with the way she's standing you should only be able to see only about the index finger (maybe the knuckle of the middle finger as well) when her hand is wrapped around that bouquet like that. Hold something up that's kinda round and stand with your arm like hers is and you should see that you only see the first couple knuckles and you forget about the rest. Her right hand (on the left, just up there) has good shading I think, but you can't distinguish the different joints, so the hands look a little play-doh-y.
*The feet are also a bit strange. They're not that bad. You can easily distinguish them as feet rather than blobs, but it looks like someone got rid of the heels of her feet. Her foot is just rather flat.
* Also, the right leg (her right, our left) seems to be bent at a weird angle. Perhaps if you put her knee in the center more and adjusted the angle from the knee to the ankle so it's a little steeper then she might not look so uncomfortable
* The horns are also a little off. The one on the far side of her head should be angled toward the other one, so just have it arch in the totally opposite direction. And it should also be shorter than the totally visible one since it's all the way on that side of the head that we can't see.
But overall, it's pretty good. The face is a little strange as well with this picture, but since I can't actually pinpoint the things that should be altered I will leave it up to others to do so. Sorry for all the typing. I just didn't know if you minded a red line or not, so I didn't do one. sweatdrop And if you count the issues I addressed it was only ~four so you're good. 3nodding Keep up the good work, fellow. rofl
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 2:46 pm
Looks reallly good, awesome shading to!
the face looks a little odd though...
idk.... the proportions on it seem wierd.
maybe if her head were a bit wider? wink
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 5:00 pm
its realli good [i love the gwee!!]
all i have to say reali is that one leg is longer then the otherand the head seems odd. idk. i think it has to do w. the eyes being to high up? idk. just something.
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 9:48 pm
Lols... Most people I've asked are saying there's something odd about the face, but nobody can really agree on what's wrong exactly. Thanks all. This'll help me for my next piece of artwork.
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 1:56 am
Yup, I think it's better if you make the eyes bigger and the nose seemed somehow odd. Lol. 3nodding Good Job anyway!^^
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:11 am
For the face, the jawline should angle up more towards the ear, and the nose is at a slightly strange angle. Because the head is turned the nose should be a little more to *our* right. Those are the only face-issues that I can see, and the rest has been covered. This is adorable! heart ESPECIALLY the Gwee.
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:53 pm
Lols, thanks all. I think I probably should have made the gwee larger, though, and made it a more significant part of the picture. Maybe next time, mm...
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:05 pm
Oh! I think you should show the whites of the eyes too. I think that may also be one reason why the face looks off. Seriously. I thought about it and that was what I came up with.
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:15 pm
Oh, yeah, the whites of the eyes. I forgot about that since I usually just skip the whites of the eyes. I'll remember that next time.
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