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 Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:28 am
Hello everyone! This is my quest for an ICRS character. I hope you enjoy what I have created in my little imagination. =] .:Navigation:. Post 1::Opening/Navigation/Form Post 2::About the Criminal Post 3::Home Planet Post 4::About the Child Post 5::About the Father Post 6::The Crime Post 7::Credits .:Form:. Guardian's Name: Erikk Wilson Criminal's Name: Anorrann Dawnlute Criminal's Crime: Just like almost any other planet, the planet of Lovurine frowns upon those who steal, cheat, and of course, kill. Well, once Dawn and Issabelle split, he was all over the planet, stealing, pickpocketing, and being a rotten low down thief. He was not just an ordinary thief however, he was the organizations leader. He became so very bad and power hungry. He persuaded some other lowlife beggars to come alongside him and they did. He taught them how to become thieves as well. He started a little organization against the government, but his main concern was those people whom were in love. Every few nights he would go through couples houses and steal wedding rings, or things that he had observed were important to that couple. He trained his underlings well, because they became rich off the deeds he gave. He was the crime lord of Lovurine. The councilmen of the planet decided that since they knew that he existed, they would investigate the different crimes committed and the murders of Serene and Faolone Dulough. Through their investigation, they obtained evidence against Dawn and his party of thieves. They convicted one of his underlings whom pleaded guilty to one of crimes committed and also ratted out Dawn and the whole organization. He was caught within a month of the conviction and sentenced to either death or the ICR program, which he decided to take instead of death. This event lead him to the world we know as Gaia. Through the program and the capsule launch there, he became a child, giving Erikk Wilson a chance to raise a baby of his own. Name and Brief Description of Home Planet: The planet of Lovurine has always been a very peaceful planet. The inhabitants always kind and prosperous. Love was all around. People who loved received more out of life than anything else. The planet never had any enemies that were so against them that they would attack and start war. They were a neutral planet. There on the planet lived the Lovurians. These people all had personalities of their own and had choices they had to make. Most of them had silvery or copper colored skin and long either gold or gray/black hair. Even the males. They all had long ears, like elves and either had bright blue, or gold eyes. Each one had a difference to them though. As most looked like they could all be twins, these people all were very different. There were ways of finding out who did what, but of course, like any other governed planet, they can't always be right. But, this planet was different than any other. The people here were all about love and honor of their spouses. Each one caring for one another. Friendship, honor, love, those three words made up this planet. The geography of Lovurine is that of the earth itself. It contains a lot of liquid known to them as gura. That would be our equivalent to water. And land masses which were solid enough to walk upon. Their civilization in terms of science and technology were actually very slim. They had no guns or cannons. The people used crafted swords out of wood or stone, and other weapons of the middle ages. Even though most people on Lovurine were good, not all could be. There were some of course, who were destructive, like Dawn himself, who created TOoT. The Organization of Thieves. He was one corrupt Lovurian. He became the crime lord for the planet. All of the governments banded together to try and capture him. In the end, they succeeded. Full Description of Criminal: Full Description!Baby's Name: Shawn Wilson Full Description of Baby: ANYTHING SMERD WANTS!!! SHE'S FANTASTICAL LIKE THAT! <3 Baby's Personality: Shawn is going to grow fond of many people, probably most will turn him down, some will build him up, but he will pretty much be a very lovable person. He will do this because of his past life, before his fiance and that tragic incident. He will go back between females and males as well, which seems weird, but to him, he can fall in love with anyone. Even starting from a child, Shawn would grow up and find himself loving a lot of different people. He will be kind, compassionate, and will treat everyone with love and mercy. Well, those who don't turn him down that is. Those who do not like him at all, however, he will pretty much despise. He will grow sick of whoever and whatever brings him down. He will learn that not everyone or everything is going to like him, but he can not help but feel hatred towards those things. That is his downfall. He may even plot and plan to hurt others. He also will become pretty greedy with things. In his past life, being a thief, he will become very greedy with many possessions. He will want to take things that don't belong to him.
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:36 am
The Criminal
Three words that describe this character
Stealthy, Addict, Heartbroken
The Basics
Character's full name
Anorrann Dawnlute
Nickname
Dawn
Gender
Male
Approximate human-equivalent age at sentencing
10
Approximate height at sentencing
About 7'7"
Hair color/texture/style (or hair equivalent)
Sharp pointed spines all over his head.
Skin color
Silvery-Gray
Eye color
Bright Baby Blue
General build
He is very slim, and can move very quickly.
Distinguishing marks (scars, tattoos, general markings)
He has a scar across his left eye from almost getting caught in the act of burglary.
Other distinguishing features
He has two extra 'limbs' that act as lock picks. They are under his arms, like tentacles.
Crimes that were committed
He is wanted for theft, pickpocketing, burglary, fraud, and murder.
Favorite/Least Favorite Things
Color
Black
Least favorite color
Yellow
Music
His preference for music is actually classical. He says it calms him down in risky situations and that is why he normally will keep some kind of player with him at all times.
Least favorite music
Hard metal
Food
Pastas
Least favorite food
Anything with any animal or live meat in it. He would be what we call a vegetarian.
Literature
He doesn't know how to read.
Least favorite literature
Doesn't know how to read.
Mode of transportation
His legs.
Habits
Hobbies
His hobbies include pickpocketing and burglary mostly. He goes around during the night and will begin to steal items and break into people's houses for fun. That is also how he makes his daily living. He goes in the cover of night so he is less likely to get caught.
How does character spend a rainy day? (Or rain equivalent)
He would mostly spend it in his old abandoned house where he lived. He wouldn't be able to go out and steal because everyone would be inside while he's doing things. So, he would sit around bored, picking the lock on his chest over and over, with success each time he tried. He would probably also look out to see if anyone was roaming the streets. He knew his home planet very well, and where almost everything was. His studies took him there.
Attitude
Greatest fear
It has happened, getting caught with all his criminal actions.
What is the worst thing that could happen to him/her?
Death penalty. He has once murdered a man and woman. Luckily he entered the ICR program instead!
What single event would most throw this character's life in complete turmoil? Why?
The fiance leaving him. He gave his entire heart to her. He used to be well off, in charge of gaining money through a job and keeping a nice family aura around him. He used to be a gentleman, always loving and caring. The moment that she swept herself away from his grasp, his life came tumbling down. He began to get into other things like stealing a little here or there. But than it blew up into a full blown addiction. He now 'has' to steal to get his money, and he loves doing it. He gave his life to her. He was puddy in her hands. But suddenly, she ends it, a week before they were to be wed and together forever. He was crushed completely, and his life fell.
Most at ease when
No one is home in the house he is burglarizing from.
Most ill at ease when
He knows someone is awake or in the house he is stealing from.
Priorities
How he feels about himself
He is actually very optimistic and thinks highly of himself. He does this so that he 'feels' like he can do more. Someone with a low self-esteem doesn't think that he/she can do much. Well, with his high-esteem, he thinks he can move mountains.
If granted one wish, what would it be?
To be able to live a life with all the money he would need to live a good life.
Personality
Greatest source of strength in character's personality (whether he sees it as such or not)
His ability to persuade is a huge thing. He hates talking to others, he just does naturally, but he is an amazing persuader. That and his ability to pick locks and pockets.
Greatest source of weakness in character's personality (whether s/he sees it as such or not)
His childish nature and loving to play with people's emotions will get him into a lot of trouble. He will play around to long with someone's emotions now-a-days. He used to NEVER be like that. Until her...
Biggest vulnerability
The thing that would get to him the most is if he EVER fell in love. If he did, he would be theirs for the taking. He's hardened his heart towards women and other creatures that capture his love interest after his fiance left him. But there is that chance of him loving once more.
Traits
Optimist or pessimist (Why?)
He is very optimistic. He has to be to keep on doing what he does. If he was not an optimist, he would certainly get caught right away with everything. He has to think like "I won't get caught!" so that he feels better about himself and his wrongdoings.
Introvert or extrovert (Why?)
He is very much an introvert. He actually hates talking to people. He had always been like that. He was never a carefree talker, never had many friends, the only people he would be open with was his fiance.
Talents
He is very talented at picking locks to houses and going in secretly to steal things. Otherwise, even though he hates talking, he is extremely good at persuading certain people.
Mannerisms
He used to be a fine gentleman. He would always love, cherish, and keep those whom he deemed faithful enough to earn that trust. But, that trust was broken once his fiance broke it off.
Problems/Crisis
How character reacts in a crisis
He gets very panicky and rushes to get away from anything and everything. Just so that he can be alone.
How character reacts to change
Dawn is actually ok with change. But it depends on the changes made. If they were huge and affected him in a bad way, he would of course care. But change over all doesn't bother him a bit.
General
Favorite clothing
He wears a black cloak which conceals his appearance. Once he infiltrates a home, he takes off the cloak and places it on a chair as if he owns the place. Under the cloak, he wears a black 'wet suit'. I say wet suit because it is just a one piece black suit that fits his whole body and allows him to blend in well in the dark.
Jewelry and other accessories
N/A (they get in the way of his stealth and make to much excess noise)
Family
Mother
Salnach Dawnlute
Relationship with her
His mother and him were always extremely close. He and her would do things together, giving him a heart that would always love women (or other creatures he was attracted to) to the fullest. Of course, once he used his heart and put it all in with Issabelle and then she pulled out, he never spoke with his mother again.
Father
Igdian Dawnlute
Relationship with him
His father was the leader of the family. He looked up to him and alway wanted what his parents had. He felt that he would become exactly like his father. Being the first boy they had, his father pressured Dawn to become a lot like him. Dawn didn't necessarily mind it, but he did want to have some freedoms, which in turn, did work out and he did have a lot.
Siblings
Horeranh, Angait, and Rantael.
Birth order
Horeranh, Annorrann, Angait, and Rantael.
Relationship with each
When they were all younger they were a close family. They grew up, and of course, gained different likes and dislikes, so they grew apart. But still kept in contact. Then, once Issabelle stole Dawn's heart, he left them and wasn't heard from since.
Children of siblings
None that he knows of.
Spouses
He was supposed to have one. Her name was Issabelle Songcaster. They were to be wed within a year of his time (by age 11 in our time). He gave his heart and soul to her and he was hers. She loved him back until she became tired of his constant nagging on her and he just smothered her with a little to much love. She couldn't take it any longer and broke it off. He was heartbroken and then changed his life around for the worse, becoming a criminal and stealing from others, trying to steal back his beloved heart.
Children
None.
Extended family
None that he personally can account for.
Close?
The family was always close with each other, that was until he went off alone when Issabelle left him.
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:37 am
Home Planet
The planet of Lovurine has always been a very peaceful planet. The inhabitants always kind and prosperous. Love was all around. People who loved received more out of life than anything else. The planet never had any enemies that were so against them that they would attack and start war. They were a neutral planet.
There on the planet lived the Lovurians. These people all had personalities of their own and had choices they had to make. Most of them had silvery or copper colored skin and long either gold or gray/black hair. Even the males. They all had long ears, like elves and either had bright blue, or gold eyes. Each one had a difference to them though. As most looked like they could all be twins, these people all were very different.
There were ways of finding out who did what, but of course, like any other governed planet, they can't always be right. But, this planet was different than any other. The people here were all about love and honor of their spouses. Each one caring for one another. Friendship, honor, love, those three words made up this planet.
The geography of Lovurine is that of the earth itself. It contains a lot of liquid known to them as gura. That would be our equivalent to water. And land masses which were solid enough to walk upon. Their civilization in terms of science and technology were actually very slim. They had no guns or cannons. The people used crafted swords out of wood or stone, and other weapons of the middle ages.
Even though most people on Lovurine were good, not all could be. There were some of course, who were destructive, like Dawn himself, who created TOoT. The Organization of Thieves. He was one corrupt Lovurian. He became the crime lord for the planet. All of the governments banded together to try and capture him. In the end, they succeeded.
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:38 am
The Child Name: Shawn Wilson
Nicknames: Shawny, Shaw, and Willy.
Guardian: Erikk Wilson [Chunky-Soup-24]
Gender: Male
Age: “Reborn”
Posts in: Orange
Personality: Shawn is going to grow fond of many people, probably most will turn him down, some will build him up, but he will pretty much be a very lovable person. He will do this because of his past life, before his fiance and that tragic incident. He will go back between females and males as well, which seems weird, but to him, he can fall in love with anyone. Even starting from a child, Shawn would grow up and find himself loving a lot of different people. He will be kind, compassionate, and will treat everyone with love and mercy. Well, those who don't turn him down that is.
Those who do not like him at all, however, he will pretty much despise. He will grow sick of whoever and whatever brings him down. He will learn that not everyone or everything is going to like him, but he can not help but feel hatred towards those things. That is his downfall. He may even plot and plan to hurt others. He also will become pretty greedy with things. In his past life, being a thief, he will become very greedy with many possessions. He will want to take things that don't belong to him.
Appearance: That will be in the hands of Smerdle. =]] However she wants him to look. XD As long as he's male lol. And humanoid like. =/ I don't want to have an octopus for a son. xD I want to be super surprised. =]] I like surprises.
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:39 am
The Father NOTE: Erikk is the MAIN guardian, Annalissa is his so called 'wife' in terms. They are not married, but share a house and they love each other.
Name: Erikk Wilson.
Nick names: Chunky, Soup, Erikk, Hoostine. (why that, nobody knows...O.o)
Age: Unknown, looks around 20ish.
Birthday: April 24th.
Race: Demon/Elf.
Abilities: Has the power to control darkness and shift light. He can Shadow-Meld and become completely invisible to the naked eye. He can also float due to his anklets.
Hair Color: Black.
Eye Color: A deep brown.
Likes: Friendly people, family, friends, the moon, night, fire, dark places, being left alone, Annalissa (sometimes).
Dislikes: Rude/obnoxious people, the sun, bright lights, Annalissa (sometimes), ungrateful hag-wo(men) who only use and abuse.
Orientation: Straight.
Past: He was born to a small family. At a young age he honed his skills and learned to take care of himself. He was a strong person by himself, but always hated being left alone. His parents didn't pay much attention to him, considering his mother was human, and his father was just a passerby. He was forgotten most of the time by his mother that he had to learn to live on his own. He was always independent.
When he was younger, he'd always have to learn how to do things by himself, so he learned to cook, clean, and just over all be good with housework by the age of ten. He's grown up a few years since then. He then found a girl. Her name was Annalissa. She was more of a bad example on him, but she always did have a crush on him. She would do things like beat him up a bit, smack him around, and somehow he always seemed to forgive her. He was a loving person after all. He then fell in love with her, but can't seem to stand her beatings, and just wished that she would love him like other people do. They've been best friends for a while now. Annalissa secretly awaits for him to ask her to marry him.
Now, many years later, he seems to be doing fine, still with Annalissa, and now he takes care of his children at his house, where Annalissa will come visit every so often.
Posts In: Black
Other Art: [x]
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:45 am
The Crime Just like almost any other planet, the planet of Lovurine frowns upon those who steal, cheat, and of course, kill. Well, once Dawn and Issabelle split, he was all over the planet, stealing, pickpocketing, and being a rotten low down thief. He was not just an ordinary thief however, he was the organizations leader.
He became so very bad and power hungry. He persuaded some other lowlife beggars to come alongside him and they did. He taught them how to become thieves as well. He started a little organization against the government, but his main concern was those people whom were in love. Every few nights he would go through couples houses and steal wedding rings, or things that he had observed were important to that couple.
He trained his underlings well, because they became rich off the deeds he gave. He was the crime lord of Lovurine. The councilmen of the planet decided that since they knew that he existed, they would investigate the different crimes committed and the murders of Serene and Faolone Dulough. Through their investigation, they obtained evidence against Dawn and his party of thieves. They convicted one of his underlings whom pleaded guilty to one of crimes committed and also ratted out Dawn and the whole organization. He was caught within a month of the conviction and sentenced to either death or the ICR program, which he decided to take instead of death.
This event lead him to the world we know as Gaia. Through the program and the capsule launch there, he became a child, giving Erikk Wilson a chance to raise a baby of his own.
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 6:29 pm
Credits ICRS :: Smerdle
Character Concept and Information :: CS24
Criminal Profile Skeleton :: lithle
Child Profile Skeleton :: Hikari_of_Genesis
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 6:57 pm
OPEN FOR POSTING! <3
Any comments or creative criticism is much appreciated! <33
Thank you and I hope you had fun! <333
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