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nice poem, but the ending stanza i think should still rhyme, like the rest of the poem, maybe you could say something like:
"If I lost myself, would you stare?
Or would you hold me, and say you care"

I dunno, do wat you want, thats the 1st thing i could think of off the top of my head

... nice poem






I thought you loved me,
But oh was I wrong.

You used me, abused me, and broke my heart.
I used to trust you but now I don’t.

I miss the days were we’d go out and play.
Now I see you with her.

You were my first and only love.
But now you’re nothing to me.

You broke me once, then broke me again.
I hate you with all everything I got.

But damn do I still love you.
I can’t get you out of my head.

What did you do to me?
I love you so much and I just can’t stop.

I’m stuck in the past and life is moving on without me.
I need help, I’m depressed, kill me now and end this pain.

*I BEG OF YOU*

Ok, fair enough if it's off the top of your head, but you should at least clean it up.
It's l-o-v-e-d not l-u-v-e-d but I'm sure you were well aware of that.
Your last stanza doesn't fit in, but if that's what you're going for, go ahead.
It's a wee bit simple.
And emo. Not in a good way.

nice poems