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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 10:39 pm
I wrote these a short while ago, and I was just wondering what you're thoughts on them were. Any comments are appreciated; thank you! =)
Imagine
Imagine the snow falling at your feet. Imagine this world in a full-fledged sheet. Imagine the sorrow in giving out the window. Imagine the pain of having to know.
I sing this song to remember the days, To remember the hours without any pain So that I can forget the worst of what stays And what ended up just washing away
Imagine this world, All covered in white. Everything was pure, Everything was right.
I don’t have anyone anymore, Don’t have no love to fall against. Don’t’ have no heart to do the honest thing, To fight what I’m up against.
I sing this song to remember the days, To remember the hours without any pain So that I can forget the worst of what stays And what ended up just washing away
They’ve got love, They’ve got joy, They’ve got heart, They’ve got everything.
Leave me with nothing to fall upon, Take away this sheet I lay against, Turn away from this heart and hand, But refuse thy name, Because after this, Nothing will ever be the same.
I sing this song to remember the days, To remember the hours without any pain So that I can forget the worst of what stays And what ended up just walking away
Imagine the snow falling on you’re window pane Imagine this heart that has slowly begun to fade Imagine this world in a fule-fledge sheet Imagine the pain of having to know. Understand what it's like to know.
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Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:17 pm
Trully beutifully written. The whole thing flows together nicely, I espeacially enjoyed the one you repeat several times. (I'm not sure if it's a poem or a song , but if it is a song I would mean the chorus.) congratulations on writing such an amazing song... er, poem. One of the two...
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