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Silver Wingling
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 2:36 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:55 pm


Silver Winglilng are you a girl? Cause i've been thinking you were a guy this whole time. If you are forgive the mistake x.x lol

I have no criticism really. I like this poem alot. I enjoy how you go about your poetry, for lack of better wording. I'm assuming that Kashre rhymes with away as well right?

I really enjoyed this one ^.^

Scazarith
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Silver Wingling
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:00 pm


No, I am a guy. And I have fallen in love, against my will, with another guy. And that is why I must soon perish...

Kashre is pronounced Kash-RAY, and litterally means 'clean.' It is generally used to mean 'strictly kosher.'I chose it because what I feel for him is not Kosher, in any way, shape, or form.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:02 pm


Hey, I dont know if you're joking about the whole situation (get the feeling you're not) but I hope that you are joking about the perishing part. You know theres many other ways to get through a tough time like this in your life. I am fully aware of what the Bible says about homosexuality but I'm also aware that God can heal/cure and help you through anything. So hang on tight brother. Drop me a line if you feel like you need to talk to someone.

Scazarith
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Silver Wingling
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:57 pm


I never joke about scuicide. Ever. I am completly serious. And I'm scarred. Fortunatly, I have the best friends anyone could ever ask for, closer than siblings, and one of them is convincing me to live.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 4:17 pm


Hm. Well, I'm no longer planning to kill myself. So that's a plus. I think. I'll get over this. Eventually. Maybe. Whatever.

Silver Wingling
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Scazarith
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 6:07 pm


^.^ I'm so glad to hear that Silver. You WILL make it!
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 7:12 pm


Yes, I'm going to talk with my Rabbi about it. Unfortunatly, the object of my affection happens to be the Rabbi's son... awkward

Silver Wingling
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Scazarith
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 7:15 pm


That is somewhat awkward. But if he's a good man/rabbi then he'll be able to look past the fact that its his son and do whatever he can to help you without getting emotionally involved due to it being his son.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 7:35 pm


Well he's a really good councilor, it's ME getting nervous I'm worried about.

"Hey Reb, I kind of have a crush on your son."

Yea... not gonna go too well

Silver Wingling
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Scazarith
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:20 am


I think it'll go fine. If he see's that your nervous he'll be that much more aware of the sensitivity with which he should handle the situation.
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