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 Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:06 pm
in my twistest mind
I have two dreams
both on the same lines
but two different out comes
my heart is torn in so many directions
my mind is weary from all the worry
my soul is no longer active
It stays hidden away from the surface
to scared to move
to scared to smile
wishing my future knew what's what
I can not hold this smile any more
because what I am
is no more
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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 2:25 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:59 pm
I wish I could give a happy ending to this poem but sadly there was no more to it, no good comes of this poem.
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