ok people i'm in need of some suggestions for my new fic i've come up with called cast me gently it is about sarah losing at the end of the movie so jareth gives her a choice of
submit to him and become his eternally, just give up.
or
she has 13 days in which to escape the labyrinth if she does not escape she then forfits herself.
what i need is some suggestions on how he can stall her to lengthen my fic as she chooses to run the labyrinth a second time for her freedom. keep in mind i'd like to keep this on the darker side. any ideas would be helpful.
submit to him and become his eternally, just give up.
or
she has 13 days in which to escape the labyrinth if she does not escape she then forfits herself.
what i need is some suggestions on how he can stall her to lengthen my fic as she chooses to run the labyrinth a second time for her freedom. keep in mind i'd like to keep this on the darker side. any ideas would be helpful.