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 Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:56 pm
Living in a Childlike World,
Nothings as it seems,
Waiting for the day,
I wake from this incandescent Dream.
Thinking about the past,
Thinking about the Future,
What could have happend then,
What could happen now,
Will everything we want in life,
Happend the way we want them to?
Will everything we have dremt of come true?
Will all the happy times we have,
Turn into nothing but regret?
Is everything we see here real?
Or just a Childlike fairytale,
Is everything we say and feel true?
Or is it nothing at all,
I was afraid once,
Afraid of everything in this world we live in,
I was afraid to love,
Afraid to feel something so beautiful,
Afriad of something everyone is ment to have,
I was afraid to love you in the beginning,
But now
I'm not Afraid anymore,
I'm not afraid to tell you anything
I'm not afraid to smile when you are near,
I'm not afraid to kiss you when everyone is looking,
I'm not afraid to cry in front of you,
I'm not afraid to tell you my Secrets,
I'm not afraid to tell you I love you,
I'm not afraid for once in my life,
Because of you,
I'm not Afraid of this Childlike world we live in,
I'm not afraid to fall and get back up and start again,
I'm not afraid to face my fears,
I'm not afraid to say what I want to say,
I'm not afraid to believe in myself,
I'm not afraid to be different then everyone else in this world we live in,
Because of you,
I'm not afraid to be the person I'm meant to be.
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 4:48 pm
The beginning of the poem had me worried, but as it progress to the end, I was surprised and delighted to see that it ended on a positive note. You did a good job, there were a few minor grammar errors, but they did not detract from the poem itself. Good job.
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Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 5:25 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:54 am
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