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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:29 pm
Name : Vlaityn Brales Gender : Female Age : 17 Year : 6th Year House : Ravenclaw
Ethnicity : Caucasian Hair/Eye Color : Vlaityn has unbelievably pure, dark brown hair. Although she loves it, she has been known to bleach it snow white when the mood strikes her. Her eyes are a striking shade of light, icy blue.
Pet : A silver Northern Hawk Owl named Tybalt Home Life : The Brales are known to be a pureblood family, but enjoy living among what ever people suit their fancy, magical or otherwise. Although the Brales normally reside in America, they had taken many trips to England, especially for Vlaityn's schooling. They recently have considered living in England full-time.
-Bret Brales [father] 52: Dropped out of the broom making business at a young age and was known to make large amounts of muggle currency when he took over a chain of transportation companies in America. Inherited wizarding money from deceased family members.
-Johanna Brales [mother] 45: A kind woman who adores traveling in all forms. Met Bret during one of his business trips. Spends her time designing anything from furniture to buildings and helping Bret manage his work.
Diving deeper : Vlaityn is known to be a solitary, quiet girl. Many of the people she meets make fun of her American accent. She has a cool, logical mind, but short fuse in patience. Vlaityn has been known to excel in Potions, Astronomy, and History of Magic. It was a slight note of interest when she was put in Ravenclaw, and not Slytherin. She inherited her mother's love of traveling and her father's love of reading. She devotes all her extra time to exploring books or walking outside. Although she appears a bit cold at first, those who earn Vlaityn's love and loyalty will have it forever.
Taking a closer look : The drab, gray sky seemed to bore it's very eyes into her. But she didn't mind. Vlaityn merely stared right back, as if welcoming it's scrutiny. It was strange to be in such a new surrounding, this English countryside. This dreary landscape. Yet it struck Vlaityn as absurdly beautiful. The subtly made it this way, it didn't need eye popping features or colors to make it so. She traced the scenery with her eyes once more. She tilted her head back and glanced upwards. "A pleasure to make your acquaintance, truly." Then Vlaityn turned her back on it all, and trudged back from whence she came. She had books to read, and thoughts to ponder.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 10:58 pm

You have been Accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
A nice, though short, roleplay sample. It really gave me a peek to what she is like. Overall, you did a good job with her, but a few more details could have been included.
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