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 Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 11:54 am
My Mistress Witch
Ah! My beautiful Mistress Witch!
Flying in the night without a hitch!
Her long black sleeves, embroidered in gold,
Flutter ambiguously. They fold and unfold.
Are they cloth? Or rippling night?
None can say. She's away on her flight.
She was relentlessly forsworn,
By earth and those on it born.
So she took to the skies, with eager eyes,
Gives a smile, and away she flies!
Often, she drops to ground, almost to Realities.
Almost lets her feet brush the aromatic trees,
Or itching grass, or mountain top.
But flies and flies, she'll never stop.
And who am I, to weave this splendid loom?
I'm one of the idiots hanging by the bristles of her broom.
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 11:55 am
(Note: This is based on a friend of mine! This is what she's like on her best days. 3nodding )
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:21 pm
Fairly good. Might want some meter, though.
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:31 pm
I like it. I wish I could help you with some criticism that hasn't been given already.
Nice ending, lol.
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