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bluerosebanger

 
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 9:55 am


lol my life is taking new direction
im happyier now it is in my reflexion
my glowing demeanor a smile on my face
the feeling of flying,the feeling of floating
floating in space.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:44 pm


short and nice
I like it

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:53 am


I agree with Red, this poem is short and sweet. There are a some small grammar errors, but nothing too concerning. Good job!
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