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Le Duke of Undertaker Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 7:58 pm
Yes, cornflakes are good,
treats dance perfectly with milk,
I love it much.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 8:54 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:01 pm
Well, drat. Looks like you did beat me to this. xd It's cute.
Cornflakes in a bowl
Together in harmony
With a spoon and milk.
xd There's mine. Yep. It's silly.
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 8:55 am
Well, I like them both. biggrin It's good to be silly and it's good to be cute. xd
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Le Duke of Undertaker Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 9:17 am
That could be the lyrics to a silly folk song. XD
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:08 am
Same with yours, Duke! blaugh
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 4:06 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:45 pm
here goes nothing:
cornflakes like petals
dancing in white
to be covered by milk
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 10:43 am
Now, I have an urge to write one! xd
I sat and stared
at the delicate cornflakes
swirling in my milk.
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:51 am
Awww, how cool! You both wrote really nice Haiku. blaugh
Red: I like that you made it compare to a flower. 3nodding Though, it didn't follow the 5-7-5 syllable pattern, it was good!
Angel: I could see a young girl just getting ready for school and having a quiet moment to herself to collect her thoughts so she stares at a bowl of cereal. blaugh Good job.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:35 pm
I know, I'm came one or two syllables short crying (well, that was my first haiku ever blaugh )
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 7:56 am
Hey, it was a great first haiku then. blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:11 pm
I love it!
Actually when I think of Scourged Angel staring into a bowl of cornflakes, I know she's thinking. "Why the heck am I up this early to go to school?!"
xd You know its true jo
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:23 pm
wink Yeah, usually or like today: Why do I have to get this early to go take the ACT test?
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