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Luscara

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Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 12:22 pm

This is the first cover of a series of comic books that I'm doing for my Senior Exit Show. I would really like some feedback on the composition and the over all layout.
This is the preliminary of course, as it doesn't have the title and what not on the front yet.

Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 8:55 am

good as is; it wouldnt look right with the pose if there were no sig

actually you should make it a cigar; it would look a lot better then

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Luscara

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Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:51 am

ghost ROM

actually you should make it a cigar; it would look a lot better then

I'll have to see how that looks. The character wouldn't smoke a cigar in general, but for the cover it might be interesting.

Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:00 am

you might give him some aviators, too

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Luscara

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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 8:02 pm

ghost ROM

you might give him some aviators, too

That would be so much easier if this wasn't drawn by hand.

Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:37 pm

right now it looks a little akwerd

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Luscara

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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:47 pm

Kyo_katt

right now it looks a little akwerd

Awkward how? Please explain. Here's a larger version: Rant Casey

Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 2:30 pm

i agree with ROM

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Luscara

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Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 11:45 am

Well, then I'll have to rework it to include some aviators and a cigar. razz

Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:50 pm

That is the front cover, it should be the best piece of art in the book. I like the character, I really do. But it should be more dramatic, more colorful, and thought out.

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