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qorter

PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 10:00 am


Ok so these are a bunch of pictures I drew. They range from being about a year and a half to 5 days old. There's too many to post here so the link to them is at the bottom. I was wanting help and critique on some of my techniques. If you have anything to say, please post it here and let me know! Whatever help you can give me will be greatly appreciated!!!

here's the link!
http://s210.photobucket.com/albums/bb219/qorter/My Drawings/
PostPosted: Thu May 29, 2008 9:22 pm


eek whoa that IS a lot of pictures! lol
I'm gonna critique a couple evry once in a while and come back nd EDIT this post each time k?

Dragon - it would have been better if u had left it without the background .. other than that great!
Aeron - from the neck up - awesome, the hands look odd, work on the inner curves of the palm, it kinda looks like the back of the hand .. nd i'm not sure if he's squatting or sitting .. ?
Omara - very good! but the angle of the arm coming out (his left) should be more inward .. towards "the camera's eye" or turn the whole shoulder slant to be more vertical
wolf - Perfect! .. but the eye or the actual head, could be made to face the center more .. (shadowing of the eye needs some work)
wolf - the entire body doesn't face the same direction - you could imagine (or lightly draw) a rod going through its body - from the tip of the nose to the end of the tail
naruto squad 7 - Coloring is amazing - and poses are very believable .. you could work more on the faces - especially Sasuke's - a bit unnatural looking ..
daru, Aeron, Glaedr - pretty good . . i would fix the middle guy's shirt - he looks as though he has breas ts and his neck looks too thin? or crooked
Akira - the actual body is quite shapeless, it needs curves but the face and head looks great!
Wolf - how cute! only would be to make him more lean, slender? because wolves are usually in action so they usually aren't as chubby as you drew it .. i still like it a lot though!
Sora - wow! its perfect i've tried drawing Sora before, and it's hard he is very detailed good job! (maybe blending of shading/shadowing would make it even better)
Dragon - very cool .. .. i'm unsure of where the wing on the left starts, like where/how it is attached Good job with the hands, too!
Lara Croft and Dragon - lol she looks funny (not in a bad way its just the situation she's in) .. but again the wing thing they look odd where they're attatched
Saphira - i've never seen eragon but as a dragon, it is pretty good but the scales on the belly and the arms look strange (scales- woulda been better if the scales were rounded, nd not sticking out; arms- they look inverted at the "elbow" joint)
Eragon - . . I . . don't . . know . . his head nd chin are sticking out too much?
Daru - very good! but again the thing about the chest, be it man or woman? lol
Sora KH2 - the face need to be smoothed out/ rounded - too square .. it also looks like he's fat (his belly or shirt) his leg nd the blade aren't detailed enough to match the rest of the drawing
Spike - very cute! good job .. the toes could use a little work though, and the right eye could be lowered some
Serenity and Raja -
A Dragon's Kingdom Characters -
Armoured Dragon -
Aeron -
Glaedr -
Avi Contest Entry -
Kakashi the Hippie -
Akira -
Omara -
Daru -
Dannyz and his Wify -
Dannyz and his Wify 2 -
Shadow Dragon -
Shadow Dragon -
Lara Croft -
Nine-Tailed Fox-Dragon -
Akira -
Naruto -

-- I hope this is helpful sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 8:51 pm


Go spin circles for me...

Wow... Lots of drawings... Okay, I'm just going to make a bit of a general critique. The head to body ratio seems to be off in several of these drawings, you might want to look at that. It messes me up too sometimes. Depending on the person's age, you would want to make the body a certain number of heads tall. Kids are around a ratio of 1:4, teenagers are around 1:6 (I think), and adults are around 1:7.5. I'm no expert in this area, so you might wanna double check with the specifics. Overall, the drawings are very nice, the Sora one is awesome! biggrin
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:17 pm


LOL! Naruto is playing basketball! whee I love your drawings of dragon! heart

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qorter

PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:29 am


Wow thanks guys! Ur so awesome! Ok, mangaoverdose, Omara is a girl, The naruto thing was freehanded, the person with the yellow shirt in the drawing 'Daru, Aeronand Glaedr' is Daru and SHE IS A GIRL. As for the dragons, a lot of those were drawn before I got good at the body, the sora kh2 was really bad. I wasnt very good at drawing yet....and the rest well is history! I thank you all very much for the critique!!!
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:35 pm


oh sorry its kinda hard to tell because of all the bishie boys now-a-days lol
i think you've got talent so keep on drawing .. ! (dont' know why i used an ellipses there)
nd no problem, you are very welcome biggrin

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qorter

PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 4:48 pm


It's ok. When I drew most of those pics, I wasn't yet good at girls. Us girls are hard to draw! But I have gotten better! and I've added more pics since when I made this thread so check them out!
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