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Rahenno

Unsealed Rogue

PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2008 7:24 pm


i know i made an application already and i edited it after silk denied it thats why i asked 'is it good enough for me to be a chaser or a nobody'
so do i have to redo my application or can i edit the one i already have?
PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2008 11:50 pm


Why You Want to be a becoming:
Nobody
To maximize my Role play experience in the different worlds RP
Have You Had it Before:No
What would You Do with it:I would create challenging battles and protect my comrades
Why Should We give it to you:I think you should give it to me because the guild needs more nobodies and I could help them prosper
What do You Know About it?:I know quite a bit about nobodies such as organization 13 and the powers of most of the nobodies
Give Example of Rp with Becoming:Sypher noticed as a large heartless appeared himself in front of Sypher "s**t this is bad" Sypher said then quickly shot 3 arrows to the head then fired 4 more to each arm and leg, Then sypher noticed only one even scratched the large beast " I'm ******** if i cant do more than that" Sypher said to himself while evading two massive hits from the creature. Sypher then several moments later after a barrage of attacks felt a strange power overcome him, then out of complete nowhere a dark portal appeared which led him behind the beast then he unleashed a charge of the soulless on the beast whipping it out in two hits " W-what was that" Sypher then noticed as he started changing into a full fledged nobody.

M o k i F a i r y


Rahenno

Unsealed Rogue

PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 5:21 am


why you want to be a becoming so i can be a nobody. to RP with not emotion could be fun
have you had it beforeno
what would you do with iti would protect all the people vaulable to me
why should we give it to you so i can maximise my rp skills and inprove them
what do you know about it i know alot about nobodys, for example organization 13 are nobody who keep there body and are really powerful.
give example of rp with becoming
rahenno calmally stepped out of a dark vertex into an open area where heartless converge. a few heartless appear ready to attack. the heartless come towards rahenno.he quickly summons his keyblade and he gets rid of the heartless."that was way to easy." rahenno said with head down. just after he spoke, the gound started to shake as a large size dusk appeared,slithering out the ground.rahenno looked up with one eye opened towards the dusk."i ask for a challege and you send me this? oh well, bring it." rahenno said waving on the dusk towards him. the dusk swing its massive tentacles towards rahenno. rahenno flip over one tentacle and as the other come towards him, he lands lands on the other tentacle and holds on. as he regain his balance he ran up the side of the dusk. rahenno grip his blade tightly and slashed horazantaly at the dusks head, but the dusk repeils rahenno by swinging his tentacle once again, hitting rahenno towards the ground. rahenno gets up, balancing himself with his keyblade. rahenno looked up and pointed his key at the dusk, "now you really pissed me off.lets finish this." rahenno with the full intent on killing the dusk.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:05 am


both failed, the rp is not good enough

ken-faita
Vice Captain


Rahenno

Unsealed Rogue

PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:17 pm


then what can we do to make it better, i kinda dont see anything wrong with both of them
PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 2:37 pm


Rahenno
then what can we do to make it better, i kinda dont see anything wrong with both of them
well i read yours and your grammer come on its very bad not trying to be mean but look

rahenno step out of a dark vertex into an open area where heartless converge. a few heartless appear, ready to attack.

here is how it should look

Rahenno stepped out of a dark vortex into a open area where the heartless are converge.A few heartless appear ready to attack.

now look at this,this is what i would of wrote and watch how longer and more better it goes into that.

Rahenno slowly stepped out of the dark vortex he had made to get into the village that was surrounded by heartless.The area was huge and wide as long as the eye can see and it was covered in mostly heartless.Soon after Rahenno looked around he saw 3 heartless appear right before his eyes and then began to attack.

that is what happens when you add small stuff like details you will get no where in role playing with out good detail's that and grammar do you understand when you get the hang of it you will get approved but until then just keep working on it.

Taziie


Rahenno

Unsealed Rogue

PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:15 pm


ok thanks again
PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:33 pm


hey raijin can you re-read my app. i fixed up a bit, hope it sounds alot better now

Rahenno

Unsealed Rogue


oG Ace

Tycoon

PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 9:25 pm


Why You Want to be a becoming:nobody beacause I'm a big fan of roxas and I want to follow his footsteps and make choices roxas should have picked

Have You Had it Before:no
What would You Do with it:honestly go around fighting different people testing my abilities until I have full control over it

Why Should We give it to you:because it really what I want to be and ever since I joined this guild I wanted to be a nobody because this is the first guild where I don't have to pay 4 something

What do You Know About it?:the abilities and do I get to use a keyblade

Give Example of Rp with Becoming:Xane stepped on the cliff looking down at the heartless "theres a few of them"he said pulling his keyblade out.He than ran down the cliff,he leaped of and had slashed the heartless in half the heartless faded away,the rest of them looked at Xane then rushed him "bring it on"he said putting his keyblade away he than weaped out his armblade and began slashing all the heartless,one heartless was a big fat dog it ran at Xane was quick to react it shoot big bombs at xane,he started to run down this narrow hill.He ran not looking back from up the cliff he spotted more heartless "o crap"while running down the narrow hill it started to get dark the further he went "this is not good"he then did a backflip leaping on the heartless.The dog had stop it looked around for xane for a minute,the dog felt this itch on it's back and began scratching xane hopped of then slashed the dog on the tip of his head he landed as the heartless faded,looking at the blue moon he was half way down the hill near a big mansion that took up half the hill.He walked down the hill and then remembered that there was still heartless down here.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:08 am


approved

ken-faita
Vice Captain


fortitudeoth

PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 7:46 pm


Why do you want this becoming: Because it would make it funner to Rp and stuff like that. I also think it would be pretty fun to be a bad guy, since in every RP guild Ive been in (Which is a good amount), Ive always been a good guy.

Have you had it before?: No (but Ive played with roxas in KH2 and that technically counts as being a nobody before XD)

Why should we give it to you: Well Im pretty inteligent, and friendly most of the time and probably qualified to use it. I wont god-mod or auto hit or any of that other n0ob stuff. I have good grammer, I wont get angry with anyone.....and many other reasons, but I dont feel like talking about how good I am, since Im a modest person

What do you know about it: I know most of all there is to know about it, since I played KH2 and I have read alot about it on Kingdom Hearts sites and stuff like that. So If you want to know specifically what I know about it in detail then Ill tell you, but I dont feel like spending 20 minutes explaining fully what a Nobody is.

Give example with Rp:
Kuro emerged from the darkness as he looked around the strange area. The area was completely empty, except for a long, narrow staircase infront of him, leading up to a place that couldnt be seen from the elevation he was standing from.
Seems Ive got no where to go but up.
He spoke in an emotionless tone to himself as the dark portal behind him disapeared. Kuro then sighed as he took a few steps forward, his black cloak swayed slightly as he took a few slow steps forward toward the long and seemingly endless staircase in front of him. After a few steps he reached the staircase. It seemed to be floating in air as their was nothing holding the steps up. Kuro lifted his right leg and placed his right foot gently onto the first step. Suddenly as his foot made contact with the floating step, heartless apeared all around him.
Whats this?
He asked as he turned around and put his foot off the step and looked around at the completely black figures. Suddenly one of the heartless jumped at him from his right side. Kuro simply took a step forward, leaving the heartless to zoom right past him.
So that's how it is eh?
He said to the heartless who just fidgeted back and forth, gazing at Kuro. Once again the same heartless as before took a leap toward Kuro, yet this time Kuro reacted differently. This time he held out his arm and a huge scythe apeared in his hand out of nowhere. Then as the heartless reached his face he quickly swung the scythe to his side, slicing right threw the heartless destroying it. Kuro's face stayed straight as he examined the other heartless who seemed undaunted by the long scythe. They simply bounced back and forth for a good amount of a minute. Then suddenly, as if they were all on a queue, they all charged in at once. Kuro simply stood there as he held the scythe in his right hand, and the heartless became closer and closer. Then suddenly as they got only about a foot away from him, he swung the scythe completely horizontally across his body. The slash had gone through all of the heartless and defeated all of them.
Well that was fun while it lasted.
Kuro said to himself as the scythe vanished and Kuro turned around. He took a few steps and then, started to make his way up the staircase, whever it lead he did not know, but he was willing to look and find out.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 1:09 pm


Approved

ken-faita
Vice Captain


Rahenno

Unsealed Rogue

PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:24 pm


so do thay include me or not
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