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 Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 6:07 pm
RULER OF THE KINGDOM
The king Jhon Florish walked down the hallway of the improbable house. he needed to gather information on his two thieves that had stolen the new catapult layout. He was afraid that it would be sold to the enemy tribe jest three miles west of there fort. If they got it they would be able to blow us to pieces he thought as he opened a fancy white steel door. "the strongest steel on earth is used for a records door and people outside of here are dieing of starvation" he mumbled to himself. he stepped inside the huge room called out "Here i call for the two meaneing enemies that stole our documents please grant me there records for which i need to stop them from causing death" two records appeared in the middle of the large empty room. Jhon picked up the two documents "i must show these to the trusty in a haste he said" walking out the white steel door then going to the front door of the Improbable house.He walked out of it seeming to come out of thin air.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
any ideas?
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 4:44 pm
The kind was always a fool, he never tried to hide his appearance, or in anyway protect himself, no guards, the only thing he had was his weapon, but with this many people, there was no way he could over come all.
IDK something like that maybe?
make him get kidnapped and held for ransom >.< thats always use, a little over played, but eh, might work in this case.
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