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anonomous angel

PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 11:20 am


Poem I wrote for my schools anti-bullying campaign about a week ago.

Remember

Will you remember her face in later years?
Remember the blood, remember the tears
Remember the taunts and the careless cries
Remember the day that your victim dies.

Remember the smile that vanished from view
Remember the person who wasn’t like you
Remember her face as you taunted her so
Remember the person who wouldn’t let go.

Remember her eyes as they stared into yours
Remember the outcome, remember the cause
Remember the reason, remember the price
Remember that day, remember her vice.

Remember the message she wanted to give
Remember how much it had cost her to live
Remember she suffered, remember she cried
Remember the day that she finally died.

Remember who did that, remember in shame
Remember your victim, remember her name
Remember the hurt that you just couldn’t see
Remember your victim, remember me.

Remember my blessing, remember my curse
Remember my life couldn’t get any worse
Remember I lived, remember I died
And know that you caused my suicide.


I appreciate any comments, critisisms and general thought.
PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 9:04 pm


gonk

That made me sad. Even though I can't imagine killing myself over a bully...well my reasons would be about the same level of serious. I guess. But still. crying

KirbyVictorious

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