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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 6:07 pm


I have never written a fan-fiction before so this is my first one. I hope you like it.

FanFic Title: ie:The Day To Be Forgotten
Author: [HersheyKisses73]
Disclaimer: This is my first ever fan-fiction story and I hope you all like it. It’s quite sparky I guess you could say, but it has some language in it. So viewer discretion is advised.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Action/Adventure, Drama, Angst,
Characters: Piper, Phoebe, Paige, Leo, Aleaha, Chris, Wyatt
Guest Stars: Coop & Sierra
Summary: After the sisters not only vanquished the Triad, Dumain, and Billie’s sister Christy, the sisters and their husbands got on with their lives and started families of their own. They’ve lived with their families for years, not worrying about demons that survived and the sisters continued to help future witches and whitelighters. Now the sisters do not know what lies ahead of them, beyond their lives and their family’s lies lies a dark secret that should be forgotten.
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 6:11 pm


This story starts about ten years into the future, where everything took place.

“NOOOOOO!” Aleaha yelled out not believe to what they all just saw. “Everyone to the attic!” Wyatt yelled out as the demons were attacking. “ PATTY! PENNY! Aleaha yelled out, after they got hit from the leading demon that was attacking and was looking at their dead bodies.. Aleaha then ran up the first few steps and stopped in front of the magic school doorway. There she reflected one of the lower lever demon’s fireballs and bounced back at the demon, killing him.

All of a sudden Chris grabs Aleaha’s arm “ COME ON ALEAHA! Chris said as he gently pulled her by the arm upstairs. “THERE”S NO TIME FOR STANDING AROUND! WE NEED TO GET TO THE BOOK!” Chris yelled out as they were in front of the attic stairway. Aleaha and Chris ran up the attic stairs to catch up with Wyatt and the Sierra. “Did you find the spell Aleaha left in the Book of Shadows?” Chris asked Wyatt as Aleaha’s twin sister, Sierra drew a picture of the triquetra on one of the walls. “No not yet.” Wyatt said to Chris as he continued to flip through the pages of the Book of Shadows. “It should be in there Wyatt.” Aleaha reminded Wyatt. Suddenly Chris puts his hand on the book, where a piece of paper laid with writings on it. With Chris’s hand on the book page he managed to stop Wyatt from turning the page. “That’s it Wyatt. That’s the piece of paper that I wrote the spell on.” Aleaha said to Wyatt as she picked up the piece of paper.

“Ok tell me again why I have to go do this and why I will be going alone?” Aleaha asked Chris and Wyatt. “Because for one you want to have out parents back right?” Chris asked “Yeah” Aleaha responded. “Well this is the only way to get them back. Plus, Wyatt, Sierra, and I have to deal with our new charges. Since you haven’t been given a charge you have the time to go do this and the rest of us don’t.” Chris explained briefly to Aleaha. “Ya I still don’t get why I wasn’t assigned a charge anyway.” “Maybe the elders were thinking the same thing and wanted you to be the one to go back in time and change all this.” Wyatt suggested. “Ya, but why me?” Aleaha asked very curiously.” We don’t know, You’ll have to ask them when you get back. Sierra suggested to her sister.

Everyone glances at the door seeing that some of the demons that they were fighting were trying to come in through the doorway, since they couldn’t shimmer in. They all watched as the demons rammed against a shield that was placed around the attic that Sierra also put up when she put some of the crystals around the attic.

“But you said that you and Wyatt have gone back in time before and now know who you are. So wouldn’t it be better if one of you go?” Aleaha asked. “I can take care of the charges for you.” Aleaha tried to say convincingly. “No you can’t Aleaha. You see it was because of your mother that got our future this way in the first place and got all three of the sisters and their husbands killed.” Chris explained. “Don’t blame your Aunt Paige for this. I mean it’s not like she did this to our future on purpose Chris. She died trying to not only trying to save her husband, but her family as well.” Aleaha explained reminding everyone of what really happened. ”Exactly. Since Paige was being reckless , knowing that she was going right into a trap that was set up to start this and weaken the power of three.” Chris said knowing that the argument was going to continue. “Okay, so my mom was reckless, but again she only did it to save her family and you know that she can be pretty stubborn.” Aleaha said sort-of agreeing to part of what Chris was reminding her of.

“Listen Wyatt and I went into the past to deal with our parents and Wyatt’s young self. Now it’s your turn to do the same and save not only your family, but the rest of your family as well.” Chris said trying to be persuasive. “Alright since you put it that way, I’ll do it.” Aleaha said agreeing to volunteer to take part if the plan Chris and Wyatt had planned for her. “Okay just forget the piece of paper and repeat what I say! Aleaha demanded. Sierra met over with them at the book and then they all read the spell out loud

"In these words of this rhyme,
Take me back into time!
To change what must be done,
To before this terrible future had begun"


Suddenly a white and blue portal appeared where the triquetra symbol was drawn. After reading the spell Aleaha walked up to the portal. “Remember to be careful about what you say or do while you’re back in time.” Chris reminded Aleaha. “Ya you don’t want to come back to a future that is much worse future that it already is.” Wyatt said to Aleaha seriously and truthfully. “I’ll be careful. Promise me that neither one of you will get killed while I’m gone!” Aleaha said concernedly “We promise. Now go! Aleaha nodded and then turned around. Sierra suddenly started to recall how they said the spell. Realizing that something was not right about it she grabbed the piece of paper from Wyatt’s hand, unfolded it, and read the words of the spell in her mind. “Is there something wrong?” Chris asked as Sierra figured out that they said the spell wrong. “Yes. ALEAHA WAIT!” Sierra demanded as Aleaha stepped through the portal. “What is it?” asked Wyatt, who was as curious to know as Chris was. “Well apparently we said the spell differently from what’s on this piece of paper.” Sierra said now concerned to what’s going to happen to her sister after she steps out of the portal. “What?” Chris and Wyatt asked at the same time. Chris grabbed the piece of paper and shows it to both himself and Wyatt so they both can read the spell to themselves. “Oh no.” Wyatt said surprisingly. “Wouldn’t the spell that we said to open the portal cause personal gain?” Sierra asked now very concerned “Yes it would definitely use some personal gain.” Chris said and now is also concerned for Aleaha.

Meanwhile Aleaha steps out of the portal just as some demons are lurking around in the attic. “Who are you and where if you come from?” asked one of the demons that was there and was surprised to see her just like all the other demons were too. “I don’t know.” Aleaha replies honestly.

A fireball appears one of the demon’s hands. “Really? I hardly doubt that.” The demon responds. “How are you doing that?” Aleaha asks as she is getting a little nervous and scared for her life. “It’s magic. Just like how I’m going to make you magically disappear.” The demon says evilly and right before he threw the fireball.

Aleaha suddenly puts her arms out in front of her. Her left arm was bent as the other one was out a little bit further and her palms were placed outward towards the demons.

The fireball bounced back after being close to her hand and heads towards the demon. It then hits the demon, which flames rise up from underneath him. “NOOOOO” the demon yells out as he is being vanquished. The demon and the flame disappear.

Downstairs Paige and Piper are talking about what’s going on with their lives and their problems. That is until both of them hear the demon yelling out. Paige suddenly stops talking. “Did you hear that?” Piper asks Paige now wondering if demons were in the attic. “Yeah it sounded like it came from the attic.” Paige answers.”Well what are you waiting for? Orb!” Piper asks and then demands. Paige grabs Piper’s hand and orbs them to the attic. When they get to the attic they see a demon with fire surrounding him and raising up halfway up his body. Then the look around and see another fireball heading towards another demon.as the first demon disappears. She second demon is suddenly surrounded by fire that goes halfway up his body right before he and the fire disappears.

The other demons watch the first and second demon being vanquished and then look at Piper and Paige as they look at the demons,. The demons then quickly shimmer away before Piper could get the chance to blow one of them up.

Piper and Paige then looks at Aleaha seeing that she was still there. “OK WHO THE HELL ARE YOU AND WHAT DO YOU WANT?” Piper ask Aleaha angrily . Aleaha looks at them and then shrugs. “I don’t know.” Aleaha replies to Piper’s question honestly. ”What do you mean you don’t know?” Piper asks, “It means that I don’t remember.” Aleaha said in a serious type of tone.

The Continuation

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:43 pm


INTERESTING... I'd like to read more. And I myself am working on a fanfic of my own, with a little help from a friend.
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