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So hows that for a plot twist?
I saw it coming
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Well that was actually unexpected
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Wait so what happened?
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Total Votes : 4


ChainedFallacy
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 10:44 pm


"Did you...........................hear?" Random voice.
"He...........ar wh.......at?" Random voice.
"Its .............him!" Ran.......dom voi...........ce.
"Who?" Rand............om voice.
"#####...........##" Ran.........dom voic.....e.
"Its w..............ho?" Random vo.........ice.
"I..............ts you." R........andom vo........ice.
"No." Rando.................m vo...ice.
"Yes its b...............ack. The darkn..............ess is risin........g here." Random voice..


"HELP!" A scream of terror breaks the serenity of my dreams. I can hear his voice calling from the depths of my soul, i feel the intensity his voice burns with and i know who it is. I know what has happened and i know who it happened to. Yet only i know. I can remember the flash of terror in his eyes, I remember the burns he gave me in his struggle. Honestly i dont know if the fire he left insde me will ever leave....
(A memory plays)

"Hello Micah long time no see." The blade cluthced in my hand tells em everything, wind dirction, temputure, humidity... All of it from the sounds it makes as i twist it in the wind, the wieght of the blade with mostiure on it and the tempture of the hilt. Im good at what i do im not an assasin for no reason. "Im sorry that this is the way it is."
"Oh dear friend, i knew it would be you they sent when they were sick of my games." He smilied at me in a way that made my heart sink. "But i thank you for not killing me like a coward would. Atleast you have the balls to kill me like a man."
"You know then that its not me who will die here." I listened silently as his heart began to beat faster, increasing his body tempature. I was ready for this moment, but something panged at my heart as threw the liquid mix of trimethyltrimethylene glycol and hexylene glycol in to the air. I heard it touch his skin like rain and i saw the fire on his sklin go out. "I studied how your releases certain chemicals that literally explode when they contact oxygen in the air." I shake my head at how easy it was. "This mixture inhibits that. Think of it as mutant sunblock." I smile for the last time.
"Thats just fighting dirty." MIcah raised a hand at me and snapped his fingers and he sparked, but no flame. "So this is really the end." Micah looked at me as though he hadnt expected this.
"Sadly yes." I raise my blade to eye level and throw it directly into his heart. "I will never forget you, my friend." I hear it pierce his hard skin, the sickening rip of muscle and heart tissue, i even hear his blood fall through the air.
"And i...you..Seth" His knees hit the ground as he realizes ive done it. Then slowly like a sun dropping below the horizon his eyes close and he slumps sideways. A gasp for life is all i hear before i turn away, then i walk and place the pill in my mouth. Smiling in the comfort that atleast he gave me a way to leave this life behind. Tomorrow i wont remember Micah, the faction, or that i was his brother, friend and killer.

PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 9:37 pm


A.) Very creative; well done my friend.
B.) Beyond that: Thank you for material for a story arch! You've supplied me with so much to work with! ::Sniff:: You really do care, Boss!

-Kain M. Sh'Zual, Vic President

Kain M ShZual
Vice Captain

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