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Crew

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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 7:09 pm

Yay.

Hey, do not underestimate the pain of fourth grade fractions.

And go.

P.S. Previous comments all still apply, haha. The awesome, it blinds us.

Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:25 pm

*didn't understand a word*

heart heart heart

KirbyVictorious

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Voxxx

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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:39 am

Thank you for blowing up the US. It was almost as satisfying as a tragic ending. xd

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 11:02 am

rofl

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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:27 pm

Heh, I liked the ending ...both of em razz the epilogue really solved things and made it feel like everything was made to happen that way. I'm glad that Janna bought the piano for him that really was a closure to the story. I love it, excellent job on Piano man! smile

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:46 pm

Thanks mrgreen

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Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:01 am

Kirby... ;w; I'm completely overjoyed.

I was watching Twilight, but I got horribly distracted, and knew I was gonna end up wasting my brain. So I fiddled through the guild, and I realized- I never read more of Kirby's story! And I because it's so wonderfully written and such an interesting story-I happen to really like prostitutes for an unknown reason xD- and David and Janna completely made my unplanned Saturday night completely awesome.

I showed this to my friend, while I was half way through, and she's been reading it now too. She too likes prostitutes xD.

Everything's wonderful- the plot, the story, the characters, the writing. It's one of my favorites from you, along with 4000 breaths, which I'm gonna go catch myself up on now too.

I'm sorry I never came back to the guild to read your stories. D= I'd make a mole of cookies for you to show you my forgiveness but I'm too busy reading. =3

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:00 pm

I want a mole of cookies...

Yay! someone liked this! I thought it kind of sucked toward the end. But I couldn't redo it...

4000 breaths is better.

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