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NovaKing

PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 2:18 pm


I dedicate this poem

To the people who were responsible,
Who were conciliatory and consoling
To the people who told me what to do,
Who were contradicting and controlling.
To the lessons which were given to me
To the lessons which were not
To the persons who told me I could
And to the persons who said I could not

To the stories that were read to me
Before I went to bed
To the stories that I listened to,
Which strangers sometimes said.

To the nicknames bestowed upon me
Catchy, heartwarming and harmful
To the rhymes I learned back then
Silly, sly and carnal.

To the people who were kind to me
To the individuals who were mean
To all the things that were snapped at me
which made the world not what it seemed

To the sky that I walk beneath
To the rock that I call ground
To the dreams of the night and day
where all these things are found
PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 3:05 pm


I've adjusted this poem, and I think I may keep it like this. I'm almost certain that this poem has been tried before by one poet or another, but I can't for the life of me recall who they were -shrug-


This poem was inspired by my latest project in english, a class in which I am determined to follow my own seperate agenda.

NovaKing


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 4:07 pm


whoa that was beautiful it sent a chill down my spine very well done
PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 6:23 pm


xXx Tangerine Dream xXx
whoa that was beautiful it sent a chill down my spine very well done



Thank you ^_^

NovaKing


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 12:53 pm


I love it :3
PostPosted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 6:09 pm


awesome poem

LilLynxy


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:12 pm


its very good poem
PostPosted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 2:23 am


Like everyone said, this as a good poem, Nova.

It's done a brilliant way with rhyming, and it's sent the message that, not all the positive encouragement or joyful criticism is helpful. Which I think is one of the most very important things artist,writers,singers, whoevers, must understand and accept.

So, way to go ^^

Oukow

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