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Skullduggery Pleasant
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 Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:11 pm
Go ahead as you waste your days with killing
When you fall everyone stands
Another day and your convicting
With the life held in your
Hands are shaking cold
These hands are meant to fold
Speak to me, when all you got to keep is wrong
run along, run along like i know you truely
And even when your hope is gone
run along run along quickly
run along
Move along
So a day when you've lost me completely
Could be a night when your life ends
Such a heart that will lead you to meeting
All the pain held in your
Hands are shaking cold
Your hands are mine to hold
Speak to me, when all you got to keep is gone
run along, run along like I know you truely
And even when your hope is gone
run along, run along quickly
Move along
(move on, move on, move on, move on)
When everything is wrong, we move along
(Go on, go on, go on, go on)
When everything is wrong, we move along
Along, along, along
When all you got to keep is strong
run along, run along truely
And even when your hope is gone
run along, run along quickly
[x3]
(Go on, go on, move on, move on)
Right back what is right
We fight
[fade out]
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xxXSKULLXxx
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Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 7:51 am
reminds me a lot of some pop song I heard once. Try to find your own style. When I write lyrics I have the same problem. Mine come out sounding something like Evanescence. I can't recall the name of the band that yours reminds me of. All American Regects, or something like that... The verses are awesome.
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:41 pm
your trying to hard it needs to flow a little more let your self go and comit to the verse and lyrics
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 2:11 pm
as someone said your trying to hard just let go and see where it takes you and it does sound like the song (move along) no afense i have that prob some times to though
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 8:45 pm
Not a wise idea to post your songs over the internet.
unless you've copyrighted those.
Otherwise, anyone can take them and use them and claim them as their own.
(and the lyrics have parts where they look like The All American Rejects lol.)
songwriting is hard, believe me I know,
To write a truly unique song,
you gotta get inspired!
think... don't use common terms and melodies, try something NEW.
stray away from cliches, there are some things that have been done maanny times before lol
just keep writing.
the more you do, the better it gets, TRUST ME.
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 3:36 pm
AAR already made that- you sorta got 'heavily' inspired smile
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