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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 12:07 pm


Stumbled Upon this neat list:

http://americanbookreview.org/100BestLines.asp

While I disagree with many of the lines on that list being all that great, there are some gems in there. It also got me thinking, the first sentence of a story or novel may be one of the most important parts of the whole book. Which leads to this question: How much time do you spend on the first sentence/paragraph of your stories?

I know I personally spend a crap ton of time on them, which may be why most never get past the first few lines...

Anyways, how about you?

Also.. my favorite line from the above list.. and it really is a great opening line: It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. —George Orwell, 1984 (1949)
PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 6:23 pm


Favorites:

46. Ages ago, Alex, Allen and Alva arrived at Antibes, and Alva allowing all, allowing anyone, against Alex's admonition, against Allen's angry assertion: another African amusement . . . anyhow, as all argued, an awesome African army assembled and arduously advanced against an African anthill, assiduously annihilating ant after ant, and afterward, Alex astonishingly accuses Albert as also accepting Africa's antipodal ant annexation. —Walter Abish, Alphabetical Africa (1974)

53. It was a pleasure to burn. —Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451 (1953)


...Why was "Mr. and Mrs. Dursley of Number Four, Pivet Drive were proud to say that they were perfectly normal, thank you very much." not on that list???

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 6:43 pm


I haven't the faintest idea of why that didn't make the cut, as that is a much better opener then many I saw on that list.
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