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 Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:08 pm
Long in time, Fire breathes,
Souls are free, from this hell,
They know who we are,
They run from us in unison,
Like we are the enemy unseen,
We're just anceint souls,
Looking for our home,
And yet they turn us away,
Though we are like them,
In every way,
Fierce in nature,
Tender as choice,
We watch smiling,
Wondering,
As they disappear into the darkness,
One Wolf, One Fang,
Walking in this world,H
Holding on to this life as if nothing matters,
Breaking all the rules,
But doing what is right,
Standing at a crossroads,
As all of our own run from us,
And yet we care not of their accusations,
For eternity takes that effect on us all,
Love is just that,
Eteranl flames,
Ancient Souls,
Meeting where they can!
Please tell me what you think!!!!!
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Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:08 pm
It has an eerie tone. I love it.
Oddly enough... it reminds me of a deep lavender mist... that is what I mean by eerie.
Beautifully done.
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:36 pm
yeah, I agree with Vikki. It's just vague enough not to give everything away, but still clear enough to give a "mist" of what it's about.
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:49 pm
Very old world. Reminds me of a few dreams I've had.
Simple but deep. Nice.
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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:48 am
*blushes* thanks...I'm glad you guys like it! I'm into poetry like that! If you want I could post others!!!
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