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darkrose29

PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:53 pm


No one noticed the little girl
As she walked down the street,
Holding a knife in her hands
With which to cut her life strings.
A crow above caught her eye,
And once more she wished to fly
Far away form this life
That left her in such pain.
No one noticed the little girl,
As she followed that crow.
It led her to a high, high cliff
And there it bid her stop.
That little crow who led her there
Watched as she, with no fear,
Spread her arms and jumped away
From this life that caused her pain.
And the saddest part of all:
No one noticed she was gone.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 12:15 am


Wow I loved how you kept the theme of the crow, flying and spreading her arms/wings involved with the theme of sadness, depression and something else I cant put my finger on. Very good, deep and emotional poem.

LunarHybrid
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darkrose29

PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:37 am


thank you!
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 5:37 pm


I love this. No question. End of discussion. It is Fuggling Fantastic.

Vampersteen


darkrose29

PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:06 pm


thank you!!! biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 7:22 am


Its really sad like most of your poems buts that what i like about them u put so much emotion into them it makes it come alive it tells a story it tells its tale its just wonderful to read but sad also it makes u wanna be hapad (happy sad i just mad it up) O_^ <---------- that would be the expression on ur face of hapad mrgreen lolz

Voodoo Doll Tempest


aigis_raiden

PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:38 am


It's really awesome. Write more!
PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:09 pm


I really do like this poem. I really love children (I work at a daycare) so it made me want to cry. ;.;

You misspelled from in the 7th line.

Scazarith
Crew


darkrose29

PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 1:54 pm


thanx for pointing out my spelling (i suck at it lol) i'm glad ya'all liked it!!!
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