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 Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 3:36 am
thx for the invite guys and with that i add to you a few off my poems ...and artwork but first i had to take a picof it lol
poem #1 ME
Those who fear me cannot know me
those who know me cannot see me
those who see me leave me be
leave the darkness to consume me
poem #2 ON THE INSIDE
On the inside i silently cry
yet again i slowly die
all alone i wither and weep
the btter darkness silently creeps
all to myself im always alone
all to myself forever to the tomb
poem #3 WINDMILL
Trees upon a grassy hill
saw blades grinding inside the mill
six years back a tragic fate
happened sadly upon the lake
the lake dried up, the hill stands bare
none now know who life ended there
but he still sits inside the mill
eyes fixed black as he sits still
there he still remains in controll
lost in body not n soul
the mill still runs on and on
turning briskly dusk till dawn
its there still for 14 years
no one enters, all have fears
till one man tries to burn it down
flaming windmill spinning round
an erie wind arose that night
children locked away with fright
the next morning nothing was there
so alone the hill stands bare
the sad old man sunk to the ground
silently waiting without a sound.
Poem #4 REAPER
Thunder roars and lightning cracks
something stirs behind his back
empty room standing still
eyes fixeed upon the window sil
eyes are dark, face is black
knowing that the pain is back
floor boards creek, walls are bare
hoping still that nothings there
silence all the way around
then there finally came a sound
eyes with fear, nothing more
three quick rasps upon the door
slowly opens, just a crack
slowly opens,all turns black
first a scream, then a wail
dark turns light, face is pale
he falls limp uncovered veil
hurried footsteps, door slams shut
man dressed black runs through the rut
swooping shadows across the lawn
running swift the awkward brawn
clouds swoop close and now hes gone
poem # 5 THE ROAD OF LIFE
This feeling that i feel inside
ive felt before as time's gone by
the emptiness within my heart
its almost if im in the dark
but life through to the road ahead
blocked by thoose whose hearts are dead
this road is not an easy one
but foreign hopes lie when its done
it may not end the way you thought
bringing those who may have brought
the pain and dark into your life
bringing those who cause you strife
but in the end its always good
you'll wind up with the one you should
though you cant see around the bend
they'll always be with you, to the end
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 12:52 pm
WOW...
I really like these, some more then others, but all of them are very good.
they rhyme well, have good rhythm, and still get the point across.
I like#3 windmill the best.
...do keep writing!!
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Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 3:31 am
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