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 Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 6:57 pm
It's Sakura as a child with her adult clothes...weird but true
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I know it kind is bad...
But can you give me some hints to improve any future attempts
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:29 am
Even for a child, her face is too round (I feel that she's more of a chibi due to that fact). I feel that her hair isn't really fluid or natural since it seems more static than anything. Keep in mind that one's hair isn't tame (unless you style it sharply) so the strands tend to randomly move away from the hair at different angles/lengths rather than the artist making a strands that come one after another. Which brings me to the top of her head where there should be at least a few strands showing out rather than an image of perfect hair -- if you're going for that then you have to remain constant with that style. You did a good job, and I see alot of potential, but it's being held back due to mechanical anatomy errors such as the little girl dressed in her older self's clothing, it should be loose-fitting, and probably partially sliding off her shoulder. I can't see her hand behind the cloth, the clothing itself is too rigid, and I feel that you didn't draw her and then the clothing which would explain why it seems so unsettling the way it fits her. Besides that, you did a good job, and keep practicing. (I tried my best to critique, but I tend to be harsh, or so I'm told -- I should add this warning to my sig since I keep repeating it XD). By the way, the clothing would have wrinkles as it fits the body, just one last tip.
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:03 am
Hmm... Her waist is kinda big and yeah, I agree that she looks like a child because of her oversized shirt and where are her hands? Lol. Her wings still need some improvement. Oh and her face is too round for a teenage/adult. 3nodding
Well, at least Monoka is kawaii~! whee
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