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Akaya43
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 10:22 am


Well, on that note, I guess i'll get this started.


Chapter 1



“Akaya….Akaya….we’re waiting for you!” Maria woke with a start. She had been having that dream again, that terrifying dream. It seemed to be coming more often now then before, almost every night when before it had only been coming every few weeks.

She would be running, trying to get away, trying to hide. From who or what she did not know. She would be in the woods, though nothing looked familiar. Suddenly the woods would give way and she would run into this huge field. She would continue running when the ground would suddenly give way from right under her feet. She would fall into this huge crater. She could not breathe or see anything, just blackness. Then she would feel the wind wrap all around her, and pick her up. All around her she could feel this presence. Then there would be that voice, all around her, calling to her. “Akaya…Akaya…we’re waiting for you!” It was then that she would wake up.

Maria looked at the clock. It was only 5:30, half an hour earlier then she usually got up. However, since there was no way she would be able to go back to sleep, Maria got up. She walked over to her dresser and pulled out a nice short sleeve top and a pair of jeans. Slipping those on, she went over to the mirror.

Maria was rather attractive even though she didn’t think so. She was very tall and slim, though she had a lot of muscle’s, especially in her arms and legs. She was taller then most people in her class, which kind of made her stand out. She had long, straight black hair that reach down to her lower back. She was naturally tan and had slightly upturned eyes, giving her an Indian look. Her smile was very straight and white, though she’d never had anything done with them. Her canines were sharper then most too. Her eyes were very strange. For one thing they changed colors. One day her eyes would be a very light blue, almost white at time, then the next they would be a greenish yellow color. A lot of the time the color of her eyes reflected her mood. Another strange thing was the shape of her pupils. They looked more like cat eyes then human. No one had ever seen eyes such as hers and often commented on them. That’s why she usually tried to keep them hidden from people she didn’t know.

Maria brushed out her hair and put it up into a ponytail. She wasn’t much of a makeup person but she usually put a little on. Today was no exception. She put a light blue eye shadow on, and some black mascara and eyeliner. Once she was done Maria went downstairs for breakfast.
Her brother Jason was already downstairs eating. Jason was two years older then Maria. Despite that fact and the fact that Maria was adopted, the two were very close. Jason was a little bit taller then Maria, but not much considering the age difference. He had short brown hair and brown eyes. He was a football player, so he was pretty big built.

“Hey bro” she said, coming into the kitchen. “What’s up?”

“Hey, you’re up early” he replied. He finished with his bowl of cereal and was rinsing it out in the sink. Then he moved over and put it in the dishwasher.

Maria laughed a little. Usually she was the last one up, which meant she usually had to skip breakfast just to make the bus. Very seldom was she up this early. “A little bit” she said to him.

Jason started towards the door of the kitchen. “Well I’d love to stay and chat little sis, but I got some homework I got to finish. So if you’ll excuse me…” without waiting for an answer Jason left the kitchen and went upstairs.

Whenever Maria had that dream for some reason she was never hungry for a while afterwards. Knowing this Maria went over to the cupboard and grabbed a pop tart. She ate at the kitchen table. Once done, Maria grabbed her jacket and books and headed out the door. It was a nice sunny day and she loved being outside. She went out to the barn and over to the horses. She went down the row patting and talking to each one.
Suddenly Maria heard the bus coming down the road. She glanced at the clock on the wall. The bus was early. She ran over, grabbed her books and ran down the road. She got to the bus just as it was pulling away. It stopped for her and she got on, sitting with her best friend, Zoe, as she always did.

Zoe and Maria couldn’t look more different. Zoe was shorter then Maria by a head. She had blond hair that reached down to her shoulders. Her eyes were a brown color and she was rather white, never really able to get a tan. Even with there differences they got along great. A lot of there favorites were the same, favorite movie, favorite music, some of the favorite foods. Sure they argued, but they always talked it through, sometimes staying up into the late of the night talking.

“Hey Maria…Trying to miss the bus again?” Zoe said, more of a statement then a question.

Maria had to laugh. Zoe had a way with stating the obvious “No! Of course not.” She replied jokingly. She hesitated a moment then added, more serious this time, “I had the dream again.” Zoe already knew about they dream, though she didn’t know how many time Maria had it, she had a rough idea though. Maria had told her about the third time it had happened. They always told each other everything. Of course, they had known each other since 1st grade, the year that Maria had been adopted. They trusted each other with there life, there was no secrets between them. Unfortunately, Zoe could also be a little over dramatic.

“Again?” Zoe exclaimed, “Maybe it means something. I was reading this magazine…”

“Zoe,” Maria interrupted “I’m sure its nothing. I’ve just seen to many scary movies.” She said this with a little more harshness then attended. Zoe picked up on it. She quickly dropped the subject and went on to other things, like her plans for the night. Maria half listened to her, her thoughts also turning to her dream.

About that time, David, their other best friend, got on the bus, and sat down in front of them. David was a new kid last year. He was a year older than Maria and Zoe but was still in 10th grade, though no one knew why. The strange thing was, he looked a lot like Maria. He too was very tall and had pretty much the same build as Maria. His eyes were those of a cat’s also, though his coloring was different. Normally his eyes were a dark hazel, but turned a fire red at time. Maria had only seen this happen once. His smile was the same too, amazingly white and straight, with extra sharp canines. The major difference was their hair. While Maria’s hair was black, David’s hair was a very light blond, which was cut short.

“Hey guys, what’s up?” he asked smiling his amazing smile at them.
“Nothing” both Zoe and Maria replied at the same time. They both laughed at themselves. They thought so much alike it was scary.

The three of them talked the rest of the way to school. Usually about random things, but they had fun doing it. They were in the middle of making plans for the following weekend when they got to the school. They got off together, and then David had to go to his locker so he had to leave them. Zoe and Maria hung out at there locker for a little bit, before they too had to go to their classes.

All through school that day, Maria kept thinking about her dream. Maybe Zoe was right and it really did mean something. But what? There was another thing bothering her. Why had that voice called her Akaya? She knew it must be calling to her because no one else was in her dream. Could it just be her subconscious, reminding her of something she had forgotten? But she was sure she had never heard that name before. The more Maria thought about it the more confused she got.

By lunch, she was sick. She wasn’t sure why, she didn’t think it was because the dream or anything, but whatever it was, it was getting to her. Unfortunately her friends could tell. Zoe asked what was wrong and when Maria couldn’t tell her exactly Zoe insisted that she went to the nurse. David just watched her with a concerned look on his face. Maria couldn’t be sure but it looked like he also had an understanding look in his eyes, like he knew why she was sick. And was Maria just imaging it or was there a slight tint of red in his usually hazel eyes?

After lunch, Maria had History. David was also in this class and they always walked together. Unfortunately, Zoe had a class on the opposite side of the school.

“Are you sure you’re okay?” Zoe asked just before they went their separate ways.

“I’ll be fine” Maria told her. She really didn’t want Zoe to worry; it would probably go away in a few hours like it usually did. Oddly enough, Maria had never gotten sick, at least not that she could remember. So really, she wasn’t worried at all.

But then she took a turn for the worse; much worse. They went into the classroom together and sat in their desks. Up on the board was the assignment as usual. Today they were taking notes and the first sheet of notes were already on the overhead projector.

It was about have way through class when suddenly Maria couldn’t breathe, she gasped for air, though none came. Small black spots started dotting her eyesight. They slowly grew until nearly half her vision was black. She tried blinking them away, only succeeding to make herself dizzy. Finally she had no other choice; she turned around to David who was in the desk behind hers.

“David” she whispered. It wasn’t very loud. David looked up at her. At first he looked confused, then that look of understanding and worry came over him again. Maria started to wonder if he had heard her. “David” she repeated, quieter this time then last, she just couldn’t get anymore sound out.

Fortunately that was all she had to say. David got up and quickly went up to the teacher’s desk. He said something to her and she nodded, though Maria couldn’t tell what he said. He then came back to their desks. He picked up both their backpacks, which were heavy-laden with books, and helped Maria up out of her desk. With his arm around her back, Maria leaned heavily on him. He led her out of the room.

By then, almost everything was black. David, who still had both backpacks on his back, picked her up like she was as light as a feather, he seemed to have no difficulty at all. He started walking a hurried but easy walk. The last thing Maria noticed, before she lost all consciousness, was that David was not walking toward the nurse or even the office, but away, out of the school.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 6:05 pm


Chapter 2



When Maria awoke she was leaning up against the outside wall of the school. It took her a moment to realize where she was, though she didn’t know why she was there. David was sitting in front of her, his back towards her. He was putting something in a container and then into a small hidden pocket of his backpack. After a moment Maria tried to get up. Dizziness overcame her, causing her to fall back against the wall.

David heard her move and turned around. Before Maria could even blink he was by her side, one hand behind her back and the other underneath her. He slowly let her back down to the side walk. “Take it easy” he said, once she was sitting again. “Are you feeling any better?”

Maria looked at him a moment then nodded, a bit confused. She remembered being sick in the class room, and David carrying her out of the school…but that was it. “A little bit…” she answered “What happened to me?”

David opened his mouth as if he was going to say something. He cocked his head, his ear turned towards the door to the school. His eyes were blank though they moved slightly. He was obviously listening to something. He blinked, his eyes returning to normal. Turning his head he glanced at the school doors and then down at his watch. All this happened in a matter of seconds, though for Maria it seemed so much longer. Finally he answered her. “Later, come to my house at 5 o’clock?” he asked.
Just then they heard the bell ring. Once again Maria tried to stand up. Dizziness came over her again but not unbearable. David supported her, and helped her the rest of the way up. The dizziness subsided and David handed Maria her book bag. Students started filing out of the school, a few at first then a huge crowd.

“Can you come?” David asked

“What?” Maria had been watching everyone come out and wondering what had happened to her. So she hadn’t heard his question.

“Can you come over to my house at 5 o’clock?” He repeated.

“Um…yeah” Maria replied, still in a daze.

“Good I’ll see you then” David started walking away. A little ways away he hesitated then turned back to Maria. “Oh and don’t tell Zoey” he said. Then he turned and walked to the bus. Maria watched as he walked away, more confused now then she had been before.

Just then Zoey came out the door. She looked around for a minute then started towards their bus. A moment later she saw Maria and ran towards her “Maria! Are you okay?” she asked

Maria's thoughts were interrupted by Zoey's call. She turned towards her. Shaking herself out of the daze, she answered her. “Yeah, I’m fine…now”
“Are you sure?" Zoey asked, the worry very evident in her voice, "Because I definitely heard some kid say he saw you pass out.”
“Well…um…I did,” Maria replied “but I’m fine now.” She added, almost as an after thought. She tried desperately to change the subject. “Hey we better get to the bus.”

Zoey nodded, though she wasn’t about to let the subject drop. The girls quickly moved to their bus and got on. Zoey got on first and moved to their usual seat. As Maria got on she automatically looked to David’s seat. He wasn’t there. Quickly she glanced around. Where was David? She thought. It took her a minute to find him. When she did, she saw him sitting alone in the back of the bus. His elbows were resting on this knees and his head was in his hand, eyes closed. She wondered why he was all the way back there, but decided against going back to ask him, especially after his comment about Zoey. She followed Zoey to their seat.

On the way home Maria tried to talk to Zoey, but her mind kept drifting to the thoughts of what had happened. In the end she just gave up and listened to Zoey as she talked about her day. They were only five minutes away from her house when Zoey went back to the subject Maria feared the most to hear.

“So…What did happen today?” She asked, a little cautiously.
“Nothing Zo…It was no big.” Maria replied, a little bit harsher than intended. Unfortunately Zoey picked up on it and quickly dropped the subject and looked away. Maria felt bad; her answer hadn’t technically been a lie, since she herself didn’t really know what had happened. Still, she had never lied to Zoey and she really didn’t want to start now. She was about to tell her what she remembered when the bus pulled up to her house. Without a word she left the bus.

Once Maria got home she decided to go down to the stables. Like most families around there, Maria’s family had a large stable, with about twenty horses. Maria loved to be around them and it always helped her feel better to just groom her horse, moonstar.

She walked into the barn and then over to the tack room. There was a note on a small bulletin board above the desk. She took it down to read it. It was from her dad

Maria, I’ll get the horses tonight, but I need you to get them tomorrow. I’ll be out of town
Thanks, dad


The family always took turns caring for the horses, tonight was supposed to be her night to feed, and tomorrow would have been her day off. She was glad though, because now she wouldn’t have to worry about getting home at a certain time. Maria moved over and grabbed a curry comb and brush and moved over to Moonstar’s stall. She started grooming her, talking all the while.

Maria spent more then an hour done there and had started to forget about the days events. It was about 3:30 by then and David lived a ways away.
Maria started to saddle up moonstar but decided to ride bareback instead. She led the horse over to the fence, climbed up and swung her leg over moonstar’s back. Maria nudged moonstar into a nice easy trot and start off.
David was waiting for her when she arrived. His horse was all saddled and ready to go with David standing next to it.

“This may take awhile so let’s get going” he said mounting up.

Still going at a trot David led her down the road for awhile. Then they crossed a large field and started into the woods. Maria kept trying to start a conversation by asking questions. David would give a short answer, right to the point, and then say no more. Finally Maria gave up. They rode through woods in silence.

Then, all of a sudden, David stopped his horse and dismounted. Maria did the same and they both tied the horses to a nearby tree. David started leading them further into the woods. As they went the woods became thicker and thicker and there was a lot of underbrush.

David kept looking around and was acting very nervous. A few times they stopped and listened. For what? Maria wondered, also looking round.
They finally broke through the woods. As they entered a large clearing, Maria looked around. Clearly at one point in time it had been a field of some sort, but that could have been ten years ago. Now it was overgrown with weeds and grass.
Maria and David walked in the middle of the field. Maria was to busy looking around to watch the ground. Almost beneath Maria’s feet it gave way. She jumped back and David’s arms went around her, holding her back. She looked back at David, a little surprised at his reaction. He saw her face and quickly dropped his arms to his sides and took a step back. Only then did Maria look down. They were standing on the edge of a huge crater.

“The crater in my dream!” Maria gasped

Akaya43
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