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Das Portemonnaie

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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 7:41 pm

Maybe. Kinda sorta.
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Her torso is too long, I've realized. Tips to fix that in this picture or in upcoming ones?

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I... really hate this picture now. I loved it when I had just finished it. Now I see the deformed face and boobs and... eeugh.
Nevertheless, tips/criticism?

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Someone PLEASE help me with trees. I cannot draw trees. Gaahh.
This picture was for an auction at my school. The funds will go to helping children or some such thing. (I didn't pay attention.)
They asked me to draw something HAPPY. During that time, however, I was drawing a lot of morbid stuff, soooo... *shrug*

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THE PERVERTED EASTER CARD. YESSS. Her feet are too small, so is her waist. Breasts are like WOAH.

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Fat pirate. Her ankles are too narrow, arms to short I think. I loathe her face.

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At this point I gave up coloring altogether.

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In this picture I had a style identity crisis and my style shifted more to the anime spectrum. (At least gaia's anime.)
I need to learn to draw eyes. I think I'm okay in the boob category.

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She isn't masturbating.
This is how I'll color now. No effort whatsoever. Fast and easy.
The walls looks slimy, I''ll try to not make that mistake again.
Like I said, I think I can draw boobs just fine.

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 8:19 pm

I love the first one.

Then it wanes as every picture goes by.

I don't know, the first one seems so much energy and effort, and the following ones just kinda, get lazier and lazier.

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Das Portemonnaie

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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:01 pm

That may be because I was starting a new project and was pretty happy. I can't really help it if I'm more excited for one picture and I show it than if not.
That one doesn't have the most effort, though. At least, I didn't spend the most time on that one.

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:45 pm

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That may be because I was starting a new project and was pretty happy. I can't really help it if I'm more excited for one picture and I show it than if not.
That one doesn't have the most effort, though. At least, I didn't spend the most time on that one.

I did not mean to be insulting, but it has much more visual effort in it; The shading is much smoother, and looks more finished. Looking at the second one, there are no folds in the fabric at all; intentional or not, it looks unfinished and the roughness does not do it any favours.
Your last few ones are just sketches with a bit of tone slapped onto it; Even if you spent more effort on those, they convey none of it.

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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:34 am

I'm shitty shitty shitty shitty at eyes. I could not even begin to offer you crits on eyes.

Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:55 am

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That may be because I was starting a new project and was pretty happy. I can't really help it if I'm more excited for one picture and I show it than if not.
That one doesn't have the most effort, though. At least, I didn't spend the most time on that one.

I did not mean to be insulting, but it has much more visual effort in it; The shading is much smoother, and looks more finished. Looking at the second one, there are no folds in the fabric at all; intentional or not, it looks unfinished and the roughness does not do it any favours.
Your last few ones are just sketches with a bit of tone slapped onto it; Even if you spent more effort on those, they convey none of it.

Ah, I see. That makes sense.
I'll have to try drawing more...fluid clothes then.

And I don't spend much time at all on digital pictures. xD

Metaphor: TWO CIRCLES, THEN? D:

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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 8:45 am

stop drawing them so close together

That's all I could think of.

Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:33 pm

Your colored pencil drawings are really nice, what kind do you use? If you use the wax based ones have you tried blending it with turpentine? It's really awesome, you should try it. Also with help with drawing trees, the best way to do that is start off with a reference until you get a hang of the texture and can do it on your own. Your style is cartoonie but comic book like, I really like it. Have you also tried drawing from real life? That helps a lot with anatomy.

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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 5:29 pm

how is that elf dragon lady's makeup staying on in the shower

Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 5:47 pm

funnily enough, I liked the "Sepia" texted one the best, although by your commentary you didn't XD I liked the fluidity of the lines and how the proportion worked out.

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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:29 am

Siin Adonai

Your colored pencil drawings are really nice, what kind do you use? If you use the wax based ones have you tried blending it with turpentine? It's really awesome, you should try it. Also with help with drawing trees, the best way to do that is start off with a reference until you get a hang of the texture and can do it on your own. Your style is cartoonie but comic book like, I really like it. Have you also tried drawing from real life? That helps a lot with anatomy.

...Crayola. >__>
I use crayola or roseart colored pencils.
And I'll take that into consideration!

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