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CrossFire43
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:58 am


This area is for poems about fails, false hope, disappointment, and let downs.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:59 am


Failed Sestina


"Failure???" by Mike (me) 1/30

What is failure?
Who failed?
How did you fail?
Where did you fail?
Why did you fail?
Failure is not an option.

Who determines failure?
What did you do to fail?
Where was your alternative?
How could this been avoided?
Why didn't you do something?
Failure seems to cloud over you.

What to do now?
Who to go to?
Where are your fellow failures?
How come they are not here?
Why are they not relishing with you?
Failure can make you feel alone.

How do you feel?
What can I do?
Who can help you?
Where are you going?
Why aren't you staying?
Failure shows you yourself.

Why are you quiting?
How come you don't recover yourself?
What do you have to lose?
Where is your dignity?
Who will restore that?
Failure is never the end but the beginning.

Why do I write this you ask?
Who will?
How will you change?
What will you do?
Where is your future?
Failure is not failure, but an opportunity.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:01 am


Effort Villanelle


"Effort" by Mike (me) 2/6


I tried
I did my best
I want to cry

My heart is about to die
I took a true test
Yet I want to cry

This is no lie
At least now I can rest
Still I want to cry

Can I have another try?
I'm becoming obsessed
Now may I cry

My heart feels dry
Can it be addressed?
I'm about to cry

Look into my eye
I'm in my nest
Tears flowing as I cry

Now as I sigh
I no longer fret
It seems as though my effort is a lie
But I realize that my effort was my best try.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 6:30 am


um should romance share in this? I think u know what i mean, right? cuz like when love fails isnt it the same thing?

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:09 am


If it is a more depressing outlook of romance then yes you could post it in this area.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:18 pm


ok let my browse my journals if i did one already >.<

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 5:47 pm


i started to play this new game
it was easy at first so i thought it was lame
but then it got harder
to the point where" i" couldn't beat it
try and try and try as i might
i just couldn't beat it so i started to spite
i try to beat it in all different ways
but i still failed, failed all the same

" - saying it long *to the point where iiiiiiii couldn't beat it.

i tried one more time after this i was done
cause i was tried of losing, i was having no fun
i hid from the beast and looked all around me
and i found a new toy just as it found me
i turned around and i and saw its stare
i closed me eyes and squese the trigger there
i opened my eyes and saw it had no head
i screamed out loud THAT ******** IS DEAD!!!!
i was disappointed that i didn't kill it sooner
i went up to the beast and i said LOSER!!!!

toy=gun

i hope this is ok, sure i won, but at least i put failure and disappointment in it.

*all poems that i make up are on the spot. right here and now.*
PostPosted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 10:26 pm


dirt_gamer
i started to play this new game
it was easy at first so i thought it was lame
but then it got harder
to the point where" i" couldn't beat it
try and try and try as i might
i just couldn't beat it so i started to spite
i try to beat it in all different ways
but i still failed, failed all the same

" - saying it long *to the point where iiiiiiii couldn't beat it.

i tried one more time after this i was done
cause i was tried of losing, i was having no fun
i hid from the beast and looked all around me
and i found a new toy just as it found me
i turned around and i and saw its stare
i closed me eyes and squese the trigger there
i opened my eyes and saw it had no head
i screamed out loud THAT ******** IS DEAD!!!!
i was disappointed that i didn't kill it sooner
i went up to the beast and i said LOSER!!!!

toy=gun

i hope this is ok, sure i won, but at least i put failure and disappointment in it.

*all poems that i make up are on the spot. right here and now.*

Dude don't fret on where to put the poems... truthfully as long as you post it, it really doesn't bother me where. 3nodding And very good, espicially for a spontaneous poem. biggrin

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:42 pm


thanks. n_n
PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 4:10 am


isnt cross great? n.n

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