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 Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:48 am
This area is for poems about lies, lying, distrust, cheating.
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Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:49 am
Lying Sonnet
"Lying" by Mike (me) 3/5
Why did you lie?
What did I ever do to you?
No everything won't be alright.
My once vibrant red heart is blue.
Feel my heart.
Do you feel the pain?
Its full of tart.
and lots of cain.
I saw what you did.
Still I tried to be blind.
After words you walked with a shut lid.
That is why I cried.
For I found that you cheated
and left my heart defeated.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 6:00 am
Very good ^_^ here is one from my journal
The Ink In My Pen.
The ink in my pen is "red". not just red but a thick balckish "red". the color of humen blood. so in truth I am bleeding on the paper. Bleeding parts of myself so the whole world can see. the real me. so shall you take me for who i am? a humen in a multicolored mask. a ever changing mask. a mask that cover's every part of my body. so who would you have? me or the person i am trying to be.
I came up the first part at school(the part about the pen) the rest i came up with on the spot. hope you enjoy ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:23 pm
Lol be honest were you daydreaming in class when you wrote that first part? xd But in all honesty that was very good Reno!
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 11:52 pm
thanks ^_^ an kinda.... i was thinking about life >.<
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 5:17 pm
lies can be either good or bad
it depends whether you use them to make someone happy or sad
lies can keep you safe for a while
but when someone finds the truth
then your just in denial
lies can help you out in times of drought
but your family and friends
might feel that they doubt
whether they think that your trusting or not is up to them
but it is you that has cheated, betraied them in the end
so its up to you to use it for good or bad
but just think in the end, if it makes YOU happy or sad.
*all poems that i make up are on the spot. right here and now.*
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 7:34 pm
lies >_< but pretty good i guess >_<
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 10:39 pm
After reading gamer's poem, I decided to dust off the working part of my brain and thought of my own poem about little white lies.
The white lie, in a dark world. By me (Mike 8/17)
You begin to see the sore sight
You prepare to not cause a fight
They are not in the current dwealing
For you have told them something that leaves you swealing.
You fib...
They no know nothing of their sin
Yet you wish to hide their pride
In order to save your hide.
Why do you let them walk blind?
Why did you just walk by?
You knew that they were in mistake
Yet you acted fake?
They walk dark into the night
Awaking with such a fright
To find that you are not a friend in need
But a stabber caught in a bad deed.
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 5:27 pm
i was going to do a white lie too but it looks like that you go it covered. n_n
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:43 am
No please post it... eventually we are all going to write over each other anyway biggrin . Besides lets see more of your work.
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 4:13 am
we must write great epics ^_^
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