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[ OPEN ] WIP of Chibi Ava Iiroko

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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:26 pm

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x_____o It looks funny to me. Somethings wrong...

Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 8:08 pm

-: I couldn't change much but I made a few changes that might help you. I had the head a little more round since it fit the mood, just a little. I made the eyes smaller for me, you do not have to change it.

The dress was a little skin tight so I loosen it up a bit. Along with the dress, I moved the leg a little upward.

One side of the head, the hair was flat so you can just curve it away from the head and it should be fine.

If have any questions, feel free to ask me. :-

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