Dave the Twisted
You ever read Space Wolf? Excellent character development. When the author goes for the unexpected death, it hits you like a truck!
And as for the "Company Shortbus" (and I believe it was Isis that coined the phrase) I have that sort of deal in my own chapter.
For example:
-A carefree chapter master that is often found obfuscating stupidity. (Though granted some of that stupidity is genuine)
-A manic arsonist and compulsive cardshark. (apparently by bloodline)
"Are you sure this is how Mahjongg is played on your homeworld?"
"Well it's how everyone in MY family plays at least."
-A company champion with a MASSIVE inferiority complex. (Even though he's literally the best fighter in the chapter)
-As well as many "normal" marines that will not hesitate to bring up their Master's less glorious moments. (Such as the Thunderhawk Incident, the Multi-melta Incident, and one of my favorites, the Pavonis Incident)
And as for the "Company Shortbus" (and I believe it was Isis that coined the phrase) I have that sort of deal in my own chapter.
For example:
-A carefree chapter master that is often found obfuscating stupidity. (Though granted some of that stupidity is genuine)
-A manic arsonist and compulsive cardshark. (apparently by bloodline)
"Are you sure this is how Mahjongg is played on your homeworld?"
"Well it's how everyone in MY family plays at least."
-A company champion with a MASSIVE inferiority complex. (Even though he's literally the best fighter in the chapter)
-As well as many "normal" marines that will not hesitate to bring up their Master's less glorious moments. (Such as the Thunderhawk Incident, the Multi-melta Incident, and one of my favorites, the Pavonis Incident)
My version of the "company short bus" is mostly where they stick the chapters "problem children" All of them passed there training as is expected of a marine but... every now and then you get that one thats just a bit off.
My favorite chapter aspect/problems - (explanation)
- The whole chapter is addicted to chocolate. (a chemical deficiency)
"Thow shalt not lay a finger on the Chapters Masters butterfinger"
- Some members are extremely arachnophobic (passed on flawed genetic knowledge) "I have one terminator that faints at the sight and many that keep there helmets on in fear of the spider getting into there armor"
- They need to sleep (loss of the gene seed/organ that allows to stay awake) "Do not annoy a cranky sleep depervated marine"
I find problems more interesting to wright about then uber perfect marines.
And, some problems are normal for marines to have, like hyper activity, various health problems, chemical addictions and so on.