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 Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:01 pm
Ok.
Somehow My Last Topic Did Not Work.
I Swear I'm The Worst At Computers.
But It Is 1 In The Morning Here.
Yeah An Excuse I Know.
Anyway, I Would Appriciate It Very Much If Someone Could Help ME With This Sketch.
I'm Not Really Sure What Happened But The (Closed) Eyes, And Anatomy Just Doesn't Look The Way Its Supposed To.
Edit: sweatdrop Forgot The Picture.
Just Click On The Link.
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q48/Rae_Blackfox/Gaia Avatar Art/C-CAviArt.jpg
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:48 am
(for the record, your last topic DID work, and now you have two. confused )
I decided to redline the head and body seperately, because doing it together wasn't working with my lack of photoshop skillz sad
So, here's what I did:
1.)I added the actual iris to the eye
2.)I widened the eye a bit. If you're doing the eye style I think you're doing(style 3 on tektek.org), they aren't really closed, more squinting
3.) I tried to elongate the face a bit(sorry, pet peeve sweatdrop ) If that's your style, don't take my advice.
4.) I added a tiny nose
5.) I moved the Heart of Gold over a bit, so it didn't cover the ear.
6.) I extended her right ear's length a bit, so if the other is bent in half, it's all proportional-y still wink
And now for the bottom half.(sorry if it's really rough-I'm doing all this with a mouse:XP
All right,
1.) I widened the shoulders. Ideally, the shoulder width should be 3 heads. Unfortunately, that looks ridiculous in most manga doodles, so I shortened it a bit.
2.) You were missing a finger on one of her hands. I just added a simple hand, but you might want to fix it up a little bit.
3.) I elongated the legs. They looked bent, so I left them that way(i don't know, they still look awkward to me...)
4.)Yeah, the feet looked fine, so I decided I wasn't gonna attempt it with a mouse... sweatdrop
Keep drawing! It looks good so far! 3nodding heart
~Noelani
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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:38 pm
-: It's good, at the same time, it looks like you were drawing it at a side.
The head was falling off the side so you just need to move it to the right. Like Nedani-chan said, or listed, the shoulders need to be a little wider. I opened the eyes for my use since I didn't know what was going on.
I messed up as I was sketching over the legs so it's not so great.
If you hane any questions abouts anything, feel free to ask me. :-
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