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Chapter 14 review
Finally, some action! This was a good way to introduce Some of Lonewolf's and Haji's attacks. I had to stop and reread it at curtain points to fully grasp the scene, but it still flowed rather smoothly. Just a little faster then I was ready for, but that's probably due to the last actionless couple of chapters. Back to the point, this is an action chapter. Very fun to read, just a little difficult at points, but a quick rescan, and everything is smooth as silk. On to the ratings.

Action: 4/5
Drama: 1/5
Humor: 1/5
Detail: 4/5
Captivity: 4/5
Overall Rating: 3/5

Chapter 16 review
Okay? An interesting intro into the guild member we know as Violet. I was listening to "Short People" while reading so that was funny. But in all seriousness, I think this chapter was very short. Too short really. I did feel that Bogey's explaination of... P.A.L. was well-done though. A quick chapter that brings in a new member to the guild family, and really not much else. I don't know what else to say... Lonewolf got suckered into a situation that will no-doubtably grow into big deal. My only other comment is to Lonewolf specifically. If you do publish this into a book, becareful that CLAMP doesn't sue you for P.A.L.'s uncanny resimblence to Sumomo from Chobits. Just be wary dude.

Action: 0/5
Drama: 0/5
Humor: 2/5
Detail: 2.5/5
Captivity: 3/5
Overall Rating: 1.5/5

Chapter 18 Review
OMG! How totally awesome. So many emotions to feel. Sadness, anger, humor, happiness, fear, and relief. Simply amazing. The fight scene was especially entertaning, but maybe thats because I was listening to The Chosen Ones at the same time. Regardless, a highly enteraining chapter full of details, emotions, suspence, and action that leaves you wondering,"What next?". I'm not gonna give anything away, but it is definately a chapter you should sit down and read with time, because it is long, but easy to get into and make you lose track of time. My chapter ratings:

Action: 5/5
Drama: 4.5/5
Humor: 3/5
Detail: 5/5
Captivity (ability to hold my intrest while reading): 5/5
OVERALL SCORE: 4.5/5

Chapter 20 Review
What an exciting chapter. I was on pins and needles. I suppose It'd be best if I reviewed the chapter in two parts, as that's how the chpater was presented. For one thing, this chapter is long! Easily able to be two chapters. But With the nifty little ---- Lonewolf added in the middle, its easy to read half way, get a drink, and come back to read the rest with searching too much. So far I have not seen any spelling mistakes, which pleases me. Lonewolf, your specific words had me looking up things online. Okay, enough of the critical review, let's move on to the big point: The story.
Holy cow, what a wild ride this chapter turned out to be. I may have to read it again after school. The first half really furthered the plot, but left enough mystery to make you wonder "What's gonna happen next?" There were a few scary moments, but I think this chapter shows us just how bad the guys we're dealing with are. I was sure the soldier was a goner. But I better stop myself, less I start making spoilers. The second half of the chapter is where the action really starts. Ooh boy, what a fight! Action, action, action! Made me feel like I was playing Zelda, Metroid, and Dragon Quest all at once, but I was just reading! Wowwie! And don't think it's JUST action. Oh, there's humor. I nearly died laughing after I read the Majik thing. What an enterance. The mental image was too hilarious. But you'll have to read to find out what I'm talking about. The Juggalo Josh part was funny too. But what a battle. Action packed, but with such teamwork. The hard part is not in seeing it in your mind. No, Lonewolf paints a very clear picture, making it easy to imagine while reading. The hard part is believing Lonewolf wrote all this! I must must say, the fight senses are getting better and better. Writing a scene with multiple people fighting is hard, but Lonewolf manages not only to share the glory, but keep the scene moving fluidly. Lonewolf, I have to say, I'm happy to be writing this review. First the plot gets thicker, then curiousity peeks, then a fight, then a laugh, then a fight, then a gasp, then a fight!, and then it is all wrapped up with a little humor, a touching moment, and a general feeling of closure. So everyone, grab a drink and sit down, cause this one is going to take awhile, but I promise you won't want to leave it for a second. Enjoy.

Action: 5/5
Drama: 5/5
Humor: 5/5
Detail: 4/5
Captivity: 5/5
Overall Rating: 5/5

Chapter 22 Review
Well, I'll say this is a rather short chapter but omg what a cliffhanger. If you're like me and came in relitively later on in the guild or are otherwise unaware of some of the pass storyline, then you are going to be left wondering. I'm not sure if saying a chapter is a cliffhanger is a spoiler or not. Hmm? Eitherway, it'll leave you grabbed your moniter screaming, "Wha!?! Who? What? How? Hurry and put up the next chapter!" As for drama, well... Shadowkite, please brace yourself. I hope you read my reviews before reading Lonewolf's book, I try to give a decent warning on length, content, and such. This chapter while short is quite dramatic. Not nearly as dramatic as some of the past scenes with Stephanie, but then again, it's hard to top those. Still, be careful reading this chapter. I was suprized how much Lonewolf crammed into such a short chapter. I really am. I met pretty much all my different ratings. This chapter maybe small, but it packs a punch. Let's finish up with my individual ratings and you can get on with the book.

Action: 4/5
Drama: 5/5
Humor: 1/5
Detail: 3.5/5
Captivity: 5/5
Overall Rating: 3.5/5

Chapter 24 Review
Back to the heros' POV. A sprinkle of action here and threre to cause commotion. Keebee's utter cuteness adds points to the humor score, just because it fits there better then action or drama. Speaking of drama... this chapter's theme is DRAMA! No ifs ands or buts about it, it's dramatic. This chapter had a good amount of details, just enough to let me picture it in my mind as I read, which is very importent when reading anything. It kept my attention the whole time... except for when I had to look up "tasset". Over all a very sobering chapter. I feel now this war is personal. Special note to Lonewolf (whom I think might actually be the only person who reads these reviews): be sure to keep Aerial's *SPOILER* a recuring motive throughout the following chapters to ensure our emotional stand point. (loss the proper wording). Moving on to the ratings.

Action: 1/5
Drama: 5/5
Humor: 2/5
Detail: 4.5/5
Captivity: 4.5/5
Overall Rating: 4/5

Chapter 26 review
Lonewolf always has a way of leaving me wanting more and this chapter is no exception. there's alot of interesting things going on here. danger, betrayal, comedy. wowwee the comedy. I always love Bogey, although it seemed he was down-played slightly in this chapter, but that's understandable considering it was an introductory chapter to a new character, I won't spoil it this time in case you read the reviews first, but I'm not sure why you would, let's just say that it was this character that introduced me to the guild in the first place. Very funny reactions out of Lonewolf and Violet's "observations" only served to increase the humor. All in all a very enjoyable chapter.
Action: 1/5
Drama: 2.5/5
Humor: 5/5
Detail: 4.5/5
Captitivity: 4/5
overall: 3.5/5

btw, do to more than obvious reasons, I'm going to stop doing reviews for a little while. they seem kind of pointless at this point, so for now just assume I feel pleased with Lonewolf's Dragoons the book.