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warrior_of_boognish

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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 4:12 pm

Oh hey, droppin some rendered work on y'all

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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 5:38 pm

Oooh, lots of action :9 methinks it needs more work on the specular front, there isn't a whole lot of variety in shine. Maybe upping the brightness/contrast would help bring out some of the highlights, as well as going back and painting some in.

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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:05 pm

I did a quick paintover to illustrate some other points... you need to pick a focal point and work on using colors throughout the piece. The brighter glow on the guy's face and a fiercer expression doesn't quite do it, but I think it helps. The bright yellow needs to be spread throughout the piece or be desaturated, it's very distracting.

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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:32 pm

Hot damn thats helpful!

answered quite a bit of questions I had myself about the piece

thanks

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warrior_of_boognish

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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:39 am

You never fixed his jaw, man.

D:;

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:16 pm

The large amount of dullish purple kinda makes it less interesting so I agree with the direction Felicific was taking it
Also he has big teefs

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warrior_of_boognish

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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:13 am

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You never fixed his jaw, man.

D:;

gah!

oh hey, went ahead and twiggled the b/c levels..does look crisper with it adjusted...and made some adjustments to the jaw (hopefully)

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:29 am

looks a lot better.

Wouldn't the skull on the top of his suit have green light reflection too?

I'm not sure if its part of his suit without the green reflection. If it isn't supposed to be attached then I'd change its angle so its not leaning exactly with him.

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