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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:47 pm
Fronk waited. The sun above him fell and disappeared out of the air. There were humans in the city. He couldn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Woll Smoth were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway. Fronk was a mannequin for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the windows and he said to dad "I want to be in the windows daddy." Dad said "No! You will BE CLOTHED BY HUMANS" There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the plaza of the city he knew there were humans. "This is Smoth" the radio crackered. "You must stay still!" So Fronk gotted his sweater and stood around. "HE GOING TO STAND THERE" said the humans "I will move him" said the infacted human and he put him somewhere else. Fronk stood there looking at him and tried to blew him up. But then the sun fell and they were trapped and not able to move, still. "No! I must stand around like a human!" he shouted The radio said "Goddommit, Fronk. You are the humans" And then John was a zombie.
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:02 am
>And then John was a zombie.
Fail for not changing the last sentance.
Also fail for shitty rewrite.
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