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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 5:23 am
Ok this is my second attempt at a fan-fiction. My last one I messed up. Badly, So here goes nothing.
(Note: It is Bella's weddingday!!!)
"Alice, I thought you said you wernt going all out!" I sharply whispered. "Ahh but a plain wedding would of been no fun. Besides you only get married once. Its just you do it over many times." She giggled. Then she shoved me into a dressing room and slammed the door. "Do I want to know?" I asked smirking. "Shhh...Edward's coming!"
My heart began to beat rapidly, as I heard Edwards velvety voice outside of the door. "Is everything ready?" I heard Jasper answer him. "Yes Alice went all out this time didnt she?" Edward sighed and whispered "I hope Bella thinks she's making the right choice." This time Emmet answered. "Edward, we Cullen boys are irresistable, we could never loose our ladies."
"You got that right!" Jasper said enthustiasticly. They seemed to pause outside the door, then they left, leaving me alone with Alice. "Ok Bella we have to get you made up for your wedding! Ready?" She squeled. No! Was all I could think. Im not ready! All I've gotton for weeks was stares and whisperes from everyone in this town, everytime I walked by.
But I knew deep down, It was all worth it. I knew I loved Edward with all my heart and all my body, nothing could make me want to regret this. I put on a fake smile and said, while trying to sound happy. "Yes, do your worst." She smiled her brilliant angelic smile and sat me down in a chair in front of a mirror.
"So....lets get to work!" She squeled. She was overjoyed the whole time she was making me up. When I was done, I had my hair curled into loose curls framing my face. My face looked like a Barbie doll, it was so full of makeup that I couldn't see my original features of skin. Lastly Alice put me in the dress she picked out herself. "Alice what did you do to it?" I asked grimly. The dress now had lace on the cuffs, and what looked like little diamons on the skirt of the dress.
"Oh Bella it lookes much better this way, here I'll help you into it." She grabbed the dress in a flash and was already unzipping the back of it. It was almost impossible to get that dress on. I clinged on to my self-Esteem as I looked into the mirror. "You look beautiful." Alice whispered. I, like many girls in this world, hated the way I looked. I forced a smile and said "Lets see what you look like in your dress!"
She grabbed her dress and had it on in a flash. She then went to the mirror and put her hair up in a tight bun, she of course looked beautiful with her black strapless silk dress. Suddenly I realised something."Wait, Alice. Where's Roasalie?" In our wedding, Edward and I agreed that only Roasalie would be bridesmaid, while Emmet would be the groomsman. Jasper and Alice were our best man and maid of honor.
"Oh she wanted her own dressing room. Said she needed more space." Alice said rolling her eyes. She looked at the clock and gasped "Oh my god! Bella I need to go! The wedding is going to start!" Then she was gone. I could feel my heart beating so loudly I thought It would fall out of my chest. I almost had a heart attack as Charlie knocked on the door and whispered painfully "Its time Bella. Its time for your wedding."
I slowly opened the door, ignoring the pain in my stomach. I didnt dare look out into the church to see the swarm of people in there. Charlie grabbed my hand and whispered in my ear "Are you sure your making the right choice?" I turned and said shakily"Im sure, and...I love you dad." At that very moment the music started, and all the bridesmaids and grooms man walked out gracefully. Roasalie seemed to glide to the alter, she looked so stunningly beautiful.
I seemed to zone out as the music started and Charlie and I started walking down the aisle. My eyes were locked on Edward, he was wearing a stunning black tuxedo, but that wasnt what I was looking at. His eyes gleamed with such happiness that I had to smile my happiest smile ever. All shadows of doubt seemed to vanish. Charlie lifted up my veil, kissed me on my cheek and then sat down. I turned to Edward and took his hands, feeling the icy coldness. I knew this was the right choice.
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 5:12 pm
Awwwwww. Its perfect! 4laugh heart blaugh
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 6:02 pm
My legs were locked as though in stone as the priest began the cerimony, my eyes were locked hard into Edwards soft golden eyes, I couldnt stop staring at him. Just thinking how Im going to be his forever, eternity. Before I knew it we had gotten to the vows, Edward never took his eyes off of me as he took the ring and said "I do." He slowly slid the beatiful ring on my finger
Next it was my turn to say my vows, I took the ring quickly and said "I do." with all the sincerity I could muster. Suddenly as though on cue, I could hear all the women crying in the pews. I pried my eyes away from Edward and saw Alice, Renee, Jessica, and even Roasalie had tears streaming down their faces. Thankfully these were tears of joy, not of anger or dispear.
The priest broke me from my trance and said loudly "I now pronounce you man, and wife. You may kiss the bride!" Suddenly Edwards ice cold lips were on mine, I let my eyes close and enjoyed the moment, then he slowly pulled back, "Lets go." he whispered, sending shivers down my spine as his lips brushed my ears.
Everyone had gotton up and we're all smiling, I was so incredibly happy I made this choice, I couldnt help but run out the church with Edward, we jumped into the limo and got prepared for us to say our last goodbyes to everyone who I had known as a human. I felt a tinge of sadness pry at my heart, but I ignored it, Edward was all that mattered now.
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The reception nearly killed me, I was so tired that I could barley stand up. Everything had started out like a normal reception, the band began, toasts to Edward and I, the buffets, Alice talking asking me if she had gone too far, but the thing that annoyed me the most was Jessica apologizing for every meant thing she had ever said.
Before I knew it, my night of fun was over, It was time to make my speech. I got up on stage and poked the microphone a few times to get everyones attention. Alice, Jasper, Emmet, and Roasalie were all getting ready to leave but turned to watch me say goodbye, the family was already packed and prepared to move to another part of the country, for the treaty would be broken soon.
"Umm...." I started. The whole place became dead quiet " Now that this night has ended, I have an announcment to make. " I could feel a tear begging to form. " I wont be coming back to Forks, the family is going to move and Im going with them. Im sorry, but my life here has ended. I've got to go start a new life, I wont ever be able to come back to Forks, ever. Im so sorry everyone, for all the pain I caused." I stepped off the stage tears streaming down my face.
"NO BELLA! I WILL NOT LOOSE YOU!" Charlie screamed. He grabbed my shoulders and shook them vigerously. "NO DAD!" I yelled back at him. "This is my life. I make my own choices. Im.....sorry." Then I stepped around his frozen form and continued out the door to my new life, as a vampire.
Many thanks to KuNfUzZlEd who without her help I would have donw AWFULLY on this story!!! THANKYOU!!!
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Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 4:16 pm
I walked briskly, feeling a tear fall down my face. We all got into the car and drove off, with Alice driving. I stared out the window and saw almost everyone at my reception standing outside staring at the car, Charlie still hadn't moved. A face seemed to pop out of the crowd, he was shaking his head with a slight smile on his face, Then he was gone.
"Jacob..." I breathed. Edward turned and looked at me with a slightly hurt expression. "No, I think Jacob was at the reception!" I said quickly. "I didnt smell him..." Edward said silently. I continued to stare out the window until we arrived at the Cullen house. "So..." I whispered. "What now?" Alice's face suddenly went blank, I stared intently at her wondering what her vision was about.
Edward shook his head slowly, obviosly he read her mind. "Wha-?" I started. But Alice shook her head. "Its nothing." She said putting on a brilliant smile. "Well Edward you promised, you should do it now, before Charlie comes and arrests us or something." Alice said with a smirk. Edward grimaced, I smiled at him and said happily. "Yeah Edward, you promised! No more excuses!"
Edward seemed uncomfortable. "Uhmmm.." He said uncomfortable. "Yeah bro. you said you would!" Jasper said punching him on the arm. Everyone was staring at him, urging him on. I touched his arm, looking up at him. "Please?" I begged. His eyes went soft and he silently whispered. "Okay fine." Everyone cheered, except Rosalie of course.
We all walked into the Cullen house, I was silently starting to get nervos, this was the end of my human life. Edward led me up to his room and shut the door. "Are you sure?" He asked. "More than ever." I shakily replied, I was scared of the pain. Edward sighed and gently held my arm, I shook my head as though to urge him on. His eyes were filled with worry as he lifted my hand in slowly bit into it.
At first I felt nothing, he quickly took h is teeth out of my skin and backed away, probably afraid he was going to suck my blood out. I waited for what felt like a minute, then the burning started. I held my hand near me and tried to keep from showing my pain. I started to whimper, my arm felt as though someone had light a fire right under it and was burning me alive.
Suddenly Edward was holding me, whispering that I was going to be okay. The pain was too much, I was starting to fade from reality. Everything was slowly going black as my body went numb. Suddenly I gasped for air, then all was black.
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I was fading in and out of reality, everytime I opened my eyes, I saw someone in my new family. In my dreams, although, my mind was going crazy. I had nightmares of Edward, Charlie, Alice, and everyone else I knew, being horribly tortured to death. I felt myself stop breathing, "Am I dead?" I thought. No I couldnt be, could I? The pain was dwindling away from my body.
Soon I could see and comprehend everything that was going on. "Her smell has changed." I heard Emmet say. "Yes her transformation is almost complete." Carsliel said back. "Is everything packed?" Alice asked, troubled. "Yes everything except Bella over here." Jasper answered. "We must hurry, the werewolves are not happy." Alice whispered. "Jacob has returned and has started hell."
I pried open my eyes and marveled at my new vision, I could see perfectly. "Bella!" Edward breathed. He came over and hugged me tightly, then kissed me squarly on the mouth. I got up off the floor (yes I was on the floor.) barley moving a mussel, I was really strong. I smiled at everyone, and they smiled back, even Roasalie. Maybe she likes me now that Im her sister. "Bella." Alice said urgently. "We have to go, the werewolves are going to start a war."
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Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 11:38 am
Hey guys Im going to take a break for a little bit....I probably wont update for almost a week....I busy...but if you really want to have me update please PM me or leave RANDOM messages.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:33 pm
Awwwww its perfect! blaugh
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:34 pm
I didn't even relize it but I said the same comment twice. lol. 4laugh rofl razz
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:09 am
Nice!!!! WOW ITS BEEN ALMOST A MONTH!!!! Im realy sad. Well Back to word.
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:53 am
I stared blankly into Alice's fearful eyes. "Bella?" Edward asked tensly. "Are we ever gonna come back?" I asked quietly. Carlslile sadly replied "Bella, we may never be able to come back, not until everyone is dead." I stood completley still, staring into space. I waited for the tears to come, but they never did. Suddenly I realized I would never cry again, I felt my face, it was cold as ice. "Lets. Go." I said mechanicly.
Everyone had worried expressions as we exited the now empty house. I turned and gave Forks one last look. Everything looked much different, all the colors were much brighter and I could see way farther. "Goodbye." I whispered. I was in the car in less than a second, still amazed by my new abilities. The volvo had been packed with all my belongings along with some of Edward's and Rosalies.
Edward started the car and began driving. The car crept up to 150 miles an hour, the land was flashing by. I looked at the rearveiw mirror and saw Alice's porche behind us. I turned to Edward and asked "So how long does it take to find out if I have an ability or not?" Edward thought for a moment then said "I really dont know, they should show up soon though." "Also...when do I start craving for blood?" Edward shot me a worried expression, " Well your probably still feeding on the blood you had as a human..."
"Oh..." I replied. I looked in the rearveiw mirror again, and for the first time I saw my new reflection. My hair looked apsolutly beautiful hanging down in front of my face, my skin was pale and seemed to be glowing. I couldnt stop staring at my eyes, they had become red. I also seemed taller, I looked down and saw all fat was gone. I gasped at my perfection.
Edward smirked and said " How do you like yourself?" "I...I love it!" "Good because thats the way your going to look for all eternity." Suddenly I looked up at him. "How long will it take for my eyes to turn gold?" "Very inquisitive I see, probably about 1-3 years." All was quiet after that, so I turned on the radio. I noticed that the green trees were dissapearing and only farmland could be seen.
Edwards cell phone rang. "Carslile?" He asked. "Here? Why?" "Who are they?" "Okay fine. Bye" He turned to me and said "We're stopping here, Carlslile has some old friends who will house us and help us fight against the flea--werewolves." "Cant we beat them ourselves?" Edward turned. "Well, we're not sure. Besides we need somewhere to hide, and start over."
Edward stopped in front of an old manor house. The house was about three stories high with white paneling and black shutters. In frount of the house there were tree's aligning the path into the house. The door, which was a huge oak door, opened slightly. The whole family was in front of the door in a flash. Esme rang the door bell, there were sounds of slow footsteps coming closer. A young blonde haired girl opened the door, she was about 16. Her hair was straight sheilding her face. She was wearing faded blue jeans with a simple red tee that clung to her body.
Her yellow eyes slowly examined everyone in the family, then she turned " YO! ELIZABETH! YOUR FRIENDS ARE HERE!" She yelled into the house. Then she was gone. A woman about the age of 25 came and said "Sorry about her, she needs to learn some manners." She had brown curly hair, and was wearing a purple blouse with a plaid skirt.
"Umm, come in?" She said slowly. "Thank you Elizabeth." Carslile said. "Oh Carslile! How long has it been? Two, three hundred years?" We all filed into the house. Carslile and Esme went into a different room to catch up with Elizabeth. The first room was beautiful, there was a huge chandelear hanging over us and a large starcase leading to the next level of the house. The girl who I had first seen was watching from the railing of the next floor. She whispered just loud enough for us to hear. "Well, everything changes now." Then she dissapeared.
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:18 pm
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