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 Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 5:48 pm
Hi.. um so i have some poetry and i would like someone's take on it, plz dont b too hard smile
Silent Eyes
How do I know?
How do I see?
What and how he thinks of me.
My mind in two,
My heart unsure,
I need to know more.
If I wish upon a star,
Maybe we can go so far,
Could he see a different side of me?
I could stare into his eyes,
But by then time would fly,
Until that day I’ll wait with
Silent eyes.
Suicide
Crying tears of misery
Showing scars you can’t see
Wishing the pain would go away
Looking out on this rainy day
Wiping away my loneliness
Trying to ignore this emptiness
Covering up my scars again
Faking a smile for a friend
Sleeping away the sorrow
Torture awaiting my tomorrow
Fighting the comments, the laughs
Waiting to unleash my wrath
Wanting the end to come
But not speeding up my outcome
Coldness numbing my core
Alive right now, and forever more
The Present
Trying,
To realize fast,
Blocking,
Though tears get past.
Walking,
With no destination,
Fighting,
See the devastation.
Seeing,
Nothings there,
Resting,
But there is no chair.
Wondering,
But no conclusions,
Asking,
Drown in confusions.
Friends
Years from now,
We’re all alone,
Asking what went wrong.
Showing no regret,
We turn away, walk away,
Though we both cry.
Tears of sorrow, fear, remorse,
Still wanting you right here,
But friends are all we’ll ever be.
Never looking,
Never waving,
Never saying “hi”.
Try to cover up,
But a bigger scar shows,
And the pain still remains.
Trying to forget,
The hurt and the tears,
The betrayal and fears
Since we are only friends..
I have more but.. thats all im gonna put up for now, unless ya like it ^-^
heart
~LlD~
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 3:17 pm
whoa thats really good. I like the flow of the poems. I really like Silent Eyes. I wright poetry too but I don't know if mine is as good as this. Mine is also up here in MAGE it's under the topic My poetry..... I would like you to read them and tell me what you think. Thanks. And Yeah I really like your stuff wait I said that already darn it.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 9:45 am
I'll be true, I'll be useful, I'll be cavalier,
I'll be yours my dear
And I'll belong to you
If you just let me through *o*
AWESOME!
post more pweeese!
x] This is easy as lovers go.
So don't complicate it by hesitating.
This is wonderful as loving goes.
This is tailor made,
What's the sense in waiting?
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